Reviews for Ice
Silver Reins chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
"Wesley knows this for a fact." well written short drabble with a great statement at the end. Nice punch...Very good!
Mia chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I liked it, alot. This is my feeling too when I touch ice, and this analogy is perfect for Wesly and Lilah.
Wild Iris chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Excellent drabble. Very sensous, and I like the understated finality of the ending.

One little quibble re. this line: 'The ever-lasting burn always remains' - if it's ever-lasting it would, by definition, always remain, so the adjective seems superfluous there.
wesleyssilverphoenix chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Evilawyer chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Very interesting analogy. Nice execution.
the silence in between chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
I feel that way when I touch ice (or snow) for long periods of time, too!

But, ahem. Anyway. Lovely drabble. Absolutely lovely. You've really captured the essence of their drabble. Amazing job.
smiling chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
See. You take an everyday thing, like ice, and make it interesting.

Very good!