Reviews for Paradise
Phantom-Phreak-454 chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Oh man... That was amazing! Please, make it full length! I'd love to see it turn out good... *crosses fingers hopefully*
Phoenixdreamangel chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
This is well written, and you can really feel Christine's pain. (hugs her) Good job.
phantomess chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
that was such a good oneshot, i think that christine made a big mistake when she left erik behind *sobs and reaches for tissue* all he wanted was love! anywho. . .you should definetly make more chapters
IrishTea chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
The detailing in this story is amazing. Well, actually, this whole chapter was amazing. Please update!
Indy's Lady chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
My dear, you have amazed me. Shocked me almost speechless. This story is absolutely excellent. It shows great potential, and I for one would be extremely disappointed if you didn't follow through with it. Trust me, I have distructive ways of venting my displeasure. You wouldn't want to provoke me would you?

Personally, I think that you have the story already written, or at least planned, but you want to get a response. Am I correct my dear?

Either way it worked, so post the next chapter soon please, 'cause I'll be waiting.

-Erin.
QuillInkAndParchment chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
I loved it! Please don't let the story end there! More, please!
cario chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
This looks like the start of an excellent story to me; please don't end it here.
Freedom's Song chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
i liked it! you really should continue it! it was very well written.
Erik'sLover chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Please, continue your fic! It has to be one of the best I've read in a long time. I especially like that way you tie in the song lyrics.
Cereta chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Brava, Magnifica, Stupenda..

I must say PoNr, you have once again done it..

I love it, your mind has not failed us..

But now as for 'Let the Dream Descend'..

You must update as soon as you can..

You left such a cliff-hanger..

I am dying to know more of Erik and Amandine..

Thank for your work, I am proud of you..

The Cheeky Wee Devil,

CERETA