Reviews for A Surreal Tale
lunalovesbroadway chapter 11 . 1/7
I liked this story from the very first paragraph it's well written and believable. 11 chapters in, though, I can't help but hope for more. I somehow am feeling a little empty and dispassionate. I'll continue reading a bit more, perhaps I'll find what I'm looking for in the next few chapters. Thanks for sharing your talent!
SaiyaCat chapter 9 . 12/22/2017
Argonautt chapter 1 . 10/5/2017
you lost me in chapter 2
Phillies2 chapter 2 . 9/30/2017
The real problem is the fact that Bella keeps sending him down there on his own in the first place. I hope to get some more backstory in the coming chapters
ReadingReadererReader chapter 10 . 6/2/2017
Antares iss not allowed to love any other parent than Bellatrix.
ReadingReadererReader chapter 6 . 6/2/2017
Bella x Severus, a pairing I have delved into many times. Not may of them worth the reading, and I've got to say, I think this'll turn out well... Even if they don't become a real 'thing'.
ReadingReadererReader chapter 3 . 6/2/2017
Ah, I love it~! I'm a huge Bellatrix fan...
ReadingReadererReader chapter 1 . 6/2/2017
Oooh, a Bellatrix and Harry centric story? Seems interesting.
Some Guy In An Ambulance chapter 6 . 3/16/2017
VortexWithAnEnd chapter 23 . 9/16/2016
Holy hell that was great! I really like Antares' character and I'll definitely check out your sequel sometime in the future :)
VortexWithAnEnd chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
I really like the fanatical as Bellatrix is and even if the child would have been a means to an end,it's still incredibly wrong of them to blame her for something which she can't help.I just want her husband to die now xD
galiaf3a05c chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
What a strange style, to write some words together... or its just sloth...

For real... because of this style its more harder to read youre fanfic... and not so relaxing as it shold be... more like work on correcting a grammer...
stapet chapter 15 . 8/1/2016
Yeah you are right Herodotus was an ancient Greek historian. But the story is very good all the same.
Velial13 chapter 3 . 6/18/2016
He doesn't look like Harry, doesn't act like Harry, his name isn't Harry he's just an OC...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2016
Still not many questions answered.

And really, Bella slept with some random men just for food? That's disgusting. As I was saying, one imperio on a rich muggle and she would be millionare, why would a dark witch lower herself to be a muggle hooker/slut?!

Your prologe and plot idea was indeed good and interesting, but the rest is trash/rubbish.
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