|Reviews for Fragments|
| SugarRush chapter 5 . 7/31/2007
The first one was funny, minus a hint of slash. Wally bugging Slade and then offering to get him a cat was hysterical.
The second one was okay, Jinx reading the Bible was good though. (Can you tell I'm Christian?)
The third was just plain disturbing. That's all I have to say about it. Later!
| SugarRush chapter 4 . 7/31/2007
Wow, again, really powerful.
The first one was good cuz it was very original and I liked how you wrote Starfire & Blackfire. You did that very well.
The second one with Slade was actually kind of humorous. Him meeting Star & Rob was a funny picture. The discription of the eyes I liked very much. Good job on that.
The last one was a little weird, but nicely written. The memories racing through her mind was done amazingly. I think her fainting took us by surprise so you don't really know at first. So, that part I think you skipped into too fast. Other than that, good.
Can't wait for more! Keep writing! :)
| SugarRush chapter 3 . 7/31/2007
I skipped the first one cuz I hate slash.
The second was interesting. Raven hating Terra for what she did to BB, the way you wrote it was very powerful. Anorexic llittle slut. Ouch Rae.
The last one was cool too cuz I never see any that have to do w/ directly afterward Betrayal. And when I do see them, they usually aren't that great.
You did this really well, keep it up Azelma!
| SugarRush chapter 2 . 7/31/2007
Hee hee, more BBxTerra & some Slerra goodness. Luv it!
| SugarRush chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Hey Azelma! Wow, nice BBxTerra stuff. It's nice to see some lighthearted fuzzy fics just about them. As usual, good spelling & grammar.
BTW, I loved the last line. "Home was comfort, kindness, and cookies with sprinkles on them." Keep up the amazing work!
| KF fan chapter 11 . 3/17/2007
I liked End. You hit the perfect note there with Jinx's thought about not being able to decide if she loved his hand on hers or couldn't stand it another second.
| alibi2014 chapter 11 . 1/15/2007
These were so sweet! I especially liked Start and Vulnerable. For some reason Terra cutting her hair because she wanted a change really struck me. (And I would have thought the Titans going to Disney World would've been OOC, but it's not at all.) Nice job on all of these!
| RockyVRWolf chapter 11 . 1/15/2007
Could you do a Slade/Robin one for me please! *hugs you* I love your drabbles so much. hey make me very happy. _
| Forlorn Melody chapter 11 . 1/15/2007
I know I may not count as a friend, but don't forget about the Red X story I requested a while back.
| ZaDR chapter 5 . 12/21/2006
Jinx is Hindu.
She doesn't really do bibles.
| KF fan chapter 10 . 11/18/2006
Wow. (referring to chapters 8-10) That's not the way I think of KF, but you're the writer. You're god. And you do a really good job of it, expecially the 100 word pieces, almost like you extracted the key 100 word piece out of a 30 page short story. Like I said, I don't see KF and Robin that way. But if they were I would think you've transcribed surveillance footage.
| samuraigurl1213 chapter 10 . 10/15/2006
Ah, this explains "Time Cut" for me...
All nice, slightly too short they're confusing, but nice.
| SignSeeker chapter 8 . 8/20/2006
I really DO love it! *GRINS HUGELY*
I mean, it's ROBIN/WALLY! You wrote ROBIN/WALLY! That's so awesome. And I'm in a slashy mood right now, so that makes it even better (if that's possible).
The idea of anyone calling Robin "Baby" is just...oh, man. You just know Raven couldn't pull that off. Wally might actually be the only person that could (except for MAYBE Gar, but that's just...ew. And Robin would probably throw a birorang into his face.) You certainly have a thing for hurt/comfort when it comes to Robin, don't you? That's not to say that I don't, of course.
"The boy really needed to learn that some people had superpowers." LOL. I loved when Wally was using his powers to move all the papers away.
Man, now I am hooked.
O, Breakup!RobStar. I give you points for taking that on. And even more points for how beautifully it's written.
Seriously, I think you have Starfire down pat. I don't care what anyone else tells you. This is her: "It wasn’t that she was secure, exactly; it was that she didn’t know how to be insecure."
And I liked that Robin wasn't, like, bitter, just indifferent. He would TOTALLY be indifferent. But leave it to him to think that there's something wrong with him because of it.
And, okay, YES: "Starfire was in love with a person who didn’t exist". THAT IS WHY! That's it right there! You totally nailed my #1 reason why this pairing doesn't work.
The last one harkened back to some of the problems Bruce and Robin have been having in FT, which I liked. I'm really enjoying seeing you explore their relationship, because it's such an important part of what makes Robin ROBIN.
Fourteen...that's such a tough age, isn't it? And with two people as intense and as serious as Bruce and Robin, I think that it would be even more so. Especially because it would be hard for either one of them to give an inch. Robin growing up definitely would have been the catalyst to the unraveling the led to Jump City.
Lovely, all of them.
| Luna Rapunzel chapter 8 . 8/18/2006
You continue to amaze me on a regular basis, Azelma.
| Simply Myself chapter 8 . 8/16/2006
"Lazy" is fun. I'm a huge slash fan (much to my boyfriend's chagrin), and it's awesome to see one of my favorite writers getting into it. (I don't really count Robin/Slade because it has badbadwrong! written all over it.) I hope you continue! (Robin/Speedy is my overall OTP - hint, hint ;) )
I really like "Oil", and not just because I don't like (animated) Rob/Star. It's an awesome character piece and I love the descriptions of the others' reactions to their break up - how they think it's a great tragedy, but Robin and Star know that it was really necessary.
"Fourteen"...I love you for this: for the background into Robin's relationship with Bruce, the prelude to why Robin flew across the country to get away from him, the way it's so perfectly in character and rings so utterly true. I just kept thinking "Yes! Yes!" as I read.
P.S. Just something I noticed when rereading "Calico". Comics!Wally's name is short for 'Wallace', not 'Walter'. There was a Walter West...I think he was an evil alternate universe counterpart, but I'm not really up on Flash canon.