|Reviews for A Golden Bubble|
| Melodey70 chapter 3 . 12/4/2005
It's ME again! I'm honored that you would add me into your authors note. I really like your story, it's very discriptive. We still need to work on the other chapters of Malfoy's Watch, I'm going to work on one and e-mail it to you...Well till then my icky barely dressed indian friend!
| RiverGold chapter 3 . 10/7/2005
um... where did I leave that rock? maybe it's a good thing that I'm below down under, at the back of beyond. heh. oh look theres the rock! if you want me just go away.
| Padfoot's Sidekick chapter 3 . 10/7/2005
Ooh, very poetic! GO PADFOOT! GO!
| Betsy O'Shay chapter 3 . 10/7/2005
What is going on here? I get that the protagonist is alienated. I get that! But why? Why is she/he (I'm still not sure) in jail? Why the memory problems? Why the insistance on feeling glum? Why the refusal to use the word too? These things weigh heavily on me as I continue to read and review... Why no letter to the wonderful reviewers, telling them (me) how we're (I'm) doing? So many questions, so few answers! Too few answers. Repeat after me: Dear Aunt Chris: How are you? Thanks for all the reviews. It's just too good of you. (Rinse and repeat, if you know what I mean.)
| amrose chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
"Lets go hunt some RAT".
It is flowing well from the last chapter. Mostly angst but with some hope. Would like to see the "hope" part build as you go on, to go with the more cheerful title of "golden bubble".
| fahzzyquill chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
i really like this story. if you still need a beta i'll beta for you. keep going this is really good so far.
| Padfoot's Sidekick chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
DIE RAT! DIE!
| Balsam chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Very compelling fist chapter. You've set high standards for your next ones. The only iffy part is the last paragraph. I'm not sure why he's free. Did he escape from Azkaban here, or was this just his formulating the escape plan giving him a sense of liberation?
Other than that, really really good. Very vivid.
| Betsey O'Shay chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
What's happening here? I'm more than a little confused. Is he really in prison, or is the prison really in his mind? Why is he there? How did he get out? Why did he get out? Again, I appreciate the imagery, especially the "His life flashes before his eyes until it becomes someone else’s, and he feels sorry for them, because they had such an awful life, and he watches it like a soap opera until he knows every minute off it and it becomes his life" part. That is so strong an image. But if I ask the questions Who, What, Where, When, Why and How I have few answers given to me in this chapter. Hm...
Keep up the good work, kiddo. This chapter may not be as wonderfully wonderful as the last, but it's still got something that will bring me back to review more. I'm still interested. maybe this guy needs a new friend to give him some contrast in his life - you know - contrasting the old friends with the new ones, the differences between where he is now and where he was before, etc. Maybe not...
Now, for the important part - remember how necesary it is to email friends who give you reviews and review their reviews! Remember El-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-ah...
| RiverGold chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
that totally SUCKS! sorry! it's awful! I'm just going to go stick my head under a rock some where. I know I say that about ALL my storys but this time it's true. eek! once again, sorry to have subjected you to this torture, *shudders* well I'm off to find that rock...
| KittyPup-Sama chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Wow *cries* Its so good! *sobs*
Your really good with emotions! :)
| Dream Phantom chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Interesting. Nice job.
| RiverGold chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I Lile it but then I wrote it so that is understandble. 5 reviews and I just put it up yesterday! happy happy! yeah! umm erm yes yesyes yesyes me be crazy.
| Wiccan PussyKat chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I'm a bit drunk :p
But thankyou anyway.
| amrose chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Well, the promo does not reflect the mostly dark content of the story. It is an "angst". But as an angst it is very good with hope at the end.
I would be happy to beta for you, the punctuation errors detract from the overall high quality.