Reviews for The Start
bruisedpapaya chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
OH I liked this alot and I especially like the last line and really good thanks for posting such a deliciously good story (Oh read banned books this week!)

~It's a me thing~
hawkster chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
god story i liked it alot! lol i like the POV i dont think that it went OOC! good work!