Reviews for Patchwork
anonymous chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Awesome. This fandom needs more of stories like this. Good job.
Kamp chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
poor simon. good story. if simon were to take off, then it definitely would have been after that episode. i like the way you wrote simon, his thought processes. and i like his interactions with mal. the scene with claine was interesting.
Lunasariel chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Yay for the klutzy bravery of Simon! You had me going there for a minute, what with that pirate being all creepy, and the 'R' rating, but all's well that ends well, I guess! I love your stories, keep on writin'!
Lalaith Yamainu chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Most excelent. I'm tempted to ask what River meant by that last line... but then that would mean attempting to undertand her.
otahyoni chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
"I killed the first set of two." She glanced over at him, smiling shyly. "They looked better in red than blue."

Ooh, I wanna read THAT story.
Anora-the-Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Heh. That was rather odd, but very cool. Yep, when things seems hopeless River does tend to go all warrior-like and save their asses.
Witty Princess chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I LIKED this story! Well written, and the characters were exactly as advertised. Seriously, good job!
beege chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
A nice, tightly written little oneshot that could almost be an episode from the show.
bugchicklv chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
You know, I could SO see Simon doing THIS EXACT thing, and endangering himself, River and the other BDHs. At first I thought he might have done it out of anger or to prove that he *could*, even with your explanation that he feared for everyone else's saftey. Then, I re-read it a few hours later and figured out what was throwing me...do I detect a *hint* of Simon/Mal? *is hopeful that IS the case*
someoneontheinside chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
that was CrAzEe. no, i'm serious, and i don't mean that in a bad way. you wrote River's character and her dialogue PERFECTLY! i was like "holy guacamoli" the whole time. super-psychotic good!
Blue Eyed Dragon Girl chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Wow! Great storY! Too long to call it a one shot but awesome one shot none the less! I loved the Simon/Mal fight and I LOVE river! She is such an enigma! Keep it up! Well written! Good job! LOved it!
LE McMurray chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
This came at a brilliant time, counting down to Serenity.

Loved the story, especially River already knowing their place was on the ship yet Simon still having trouble with it.

Though chilling last line.
Vampbarbie chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
I loved the last line. That could be an interesting story to write.

Really well done.
imskysmom chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
M, another really good Layton Colt. Ya know, I've read you in four different fandoms now, and you're DAMN good in all of them. Glad you share with us all. And here's hoping Serenity inspires you again, and soon...