Reviews for Just the Son
Ladyaloysius chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
That was really good too!
ArodLoverus2001 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
great work!
Salem Navy chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Hmm... I am confused. I know that Diane is the name of one of Gibbs ex-wives & through this story it seems like she is Tony's sorta mother. Therefore I am thinking... Gibbs is Tony's father? Then about the whole no longer somebody to hold him when he woke? Confused. Please e-mail me and help me out w/ my ?'s.
nikita chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
very interesting story hope you update soon what did tonys dad do to him ... hmm and love his relationship with his step mum keep going
Dina chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
I had to read it three times before I thought I understood it.

So Tony's mother is dead, his father keeps marrying women and divorcing them. One of the first women his father married is still in touch with Tony and has been in his life for several years.

Correct me if I'm wrong in some point.

The storyline is good but a good idead would be if you wrote more details instead of letting the readers guessing and then getting confused.
DinozzoFan chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
good story but confussing?
Tweeter chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Ah, the mysterious Dianne. I wonder what she thought about the plaque at Dinozzo's Leap. I can't remember if I commented on this in flashfiction, but I like this very much.
devil3567 chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
i like this story i hope you can update soon.