|Reviews for Eternal Sunshine of the Scourgified Mind|
| Greensl33ves chapter 49 . 12/23/2009
Man, I've read this, rec'ed this, favorited it, and completely forgot to review this.
This fic made me cry so hard. It really did. It was amazingly written, sensitive, brilliant. Dee was a believably nice guy. Jo was frikking amazing, and as someone who has been around a lot of mentally ill people I must say she was a horribly true-to-life character. They way you handled her death was fantastically well-written-I read this months ago but I remember sitting there sobbing at that point.
This really is a wonderful fic. Thank you for writing it.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 49 . 10/29/2009
:) adorable ending! I'm very glad I was told about this.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 48 . 10/29/2009
"Which one of us spent the most nights in Griffindor tower screaming in his sleep?" Ron asked.
Harry grinned wickedly,
"I know which one of us spent the most nights in Griffindor tower screaming 'Hermione'."
Classic. Wonderful. Hilarious.
"Ron didn't seem to know what to say to that but felt he had to say something and she saw his lips parting with uncertainty. She couldn't wait anymore. She pulled his head in towards her own and enjoyed his silence, the silence she ensured kept on going as long as her lips covered his own.
Merlin she had missed this!"
:) I was hoping that would happen too.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 47 . 10/29/2009
""He killed him, just like he said,” a voice echoed from the other side of the dining room.
He looked across to the grand oak doorway and saw Fred and George Weasley standing there with their wands at the ready.
"I think it's time for you to go love," George said as he pointed his wand at Pansy, "Dee's coming home with us and he doesn't want to lock any vermin in when he leaves.""
HAHAHA out of all the people...
"She looked at Hermione sadly and rested a hand on her cheek,
"Oh Hermione, you wonderful little thing, you've been looking after him by yourself all this time.""
Hermione is WONDERFUL
""Time of the month? What are you a wolf or a woman?"
Bill smiled too as Hermione slapped Ron on the arm. Their smiles slowly faded and Bill pulled Ron into a quick hug. Harry looked away as did most of the others. Ginny and Hermione didn't avert their eyes; Harry supposed it was a man thing that made them all uncomfortable to watch stuff like this. He heard Bill's muffled voice though."
hahaha that joke really doesn't get old.
And it is a man thing, most of the time. Men are crazy weird sometimes :P
| SWaddict1986 chapter 41 . 10/28/2009
"His arms tore open and blood spilled...she screamed his name...there was a bright light caused by four sticks...a man who looked like a snake...a crooked house in the countryside...a room full of red haired people...a beautiful woman in a wedding dress...a huge man carrying a purple bundle and crying...a flock of yellow birds...a steam train thundering through the countryside...a big black dog...a flying car...a huge chess set...a little boy with black hair and glasses...a warm, round woman with her arms around him...a little girl with long red hair laying on the lawn with him and watching the clouds drift by...the same little girl holding out a lollypop and grinning a toothless smile..."
YEAH! lol I love the memories you chose :)
I also love how you had his magic drop him safely
| SWaddict1986 chapter 40 . 10/28/2009
"Bill closed the door behind them and wore a clearly suspicious expression on his own face that he wasn't the least bit bothered about hiding from them,"
*snerk* no he wouldn't be
"The mischievous look was slapped off his face as Charlie's hand met the back of his head,
"Shut it you." he warned."
hehe I love Charlie
"Lupin fought not to laugh and Tonks gave him a dig in the ribs. Even Mrs Weasley seemed to be suppressing a chortle and Fred and George seemed delighted that everybody was lightening up so much and George turned to see if Charlie was going to slap them all around the back of the heads in defence of his sister's blushes."
Aww. Things are starting to go back to normal!
Thank you for not killing Ron.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 37 . 10/28/2009
Not a HUGE fan of Raynar, but the lady does her job fairly well IMO. And she has humor :)
The mediator on the other hand...HAH! She shouldn't have let 'Dee' do whatever he wanted. Very funny.
""Doctor Rayner told me that you both took her to the beach often, that you took her dancing, and that you would spend the entire day just seeing how many different ways you could make her laugh. Neither of you have anything to feel guilty about." she let a tear escape her eye as she blinked and released his chin from her grip."
Aw. I never knew how to feel about Jo's parents, but her mom doesn't seem so bad at all. Feel terrible for her.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 36 . 10/28/2009
""Did Hedwig just bottle you in the face Remus?""
So, poor Remus, but that was hysterical.
Ah, poor Hedwig, getting blamed for Harry's ideas.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 33 . 10/28/2009
Arthur's memory was precious. So cute!
| SWaddict1986 chapter 29 . 10/27/2009
hahaha yes magic! I find it hilarious that the "buddy" thought it was her.
"Hermione looked around too, she couldn't hold in the smile that pushed its way onto her lips at the sight of so many people sitting in wet chairs, in wet clothes, and talking without indicating the chaos around them to their respective callers for one second."
:) :) They really are great people if they can do that. I don't think I'd be able to be so calm.
"Of all the things he couldn't do the fact that he couldn't look away crippled him the most. "
Oh no. oh no, oh no, oh no. I hate when that happens :(
Oh poor, poor Jo.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 28 . 10/26/2009
""Not including fruit. I'm talking about stuff unnaturally coloured pink. I don't like the taste of pink things."
Ron frowned at her logic,
"Pink isn't a flavour, it's a colour. You can't taste a colour."
"Oh you can," Dee nodded, "I can taste the blue M&Ms with my eyes closed.""
I agree with Ron - it's all crazy talk ;) I can never taste the difference in colors
""They have cochineal in them." she added.
Dee's face and arms dropped,
"It's a pink food colouring made from beetles. As I'm creeped out by beetles I can't eat a pink mini egg."
EW! I didn't know that! Granted I'll still eat them but still - ew
They're so great together. What wonderful friends.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 22 . 10/25/2009
How bad is it that when I saw that Dee's name was Draco, my smile faded?
Though it explains why he also talked to the TV.
"Isn't that weird how we both just lost our memories for no apparent reason around the same time?"
I'm kind of thinking that it's not Malfoy since he was okay overall with Muggle objects but at the same time that line, the fact he was in London...
"Dee was clinging onto to Jo for dear life now,"
Totally Malfoy. Damn, I feel bad for him.
""Of course we'll have you Harry!" Charlie saw his mother leap from her chair and throw her arms around a totally uncomfortable Harry."
Poor Harry. That's just making it worse *sigh*
Oh and Hermione's books getting her into trouble. Who'da thunk? ;) I may be halfway through but I hope all of this is resolved soon, lol
| SWaddict1986 chapter 20 . 10/24/2009
""How come I never knew he could speak French?" Charlie said as they reached the door of the house.
"I never knew you were left-handed until three weeks ago."
Charlie turned to Harry and shook his head,
"We're an observant bloody family aren't we?""
HAHAHAHA ah, that's great. And I thought they couldn't really keep information like that away from each other ;)
""Well I may have had to keep it quiet because mum blamed a certain brother of ours and Angelina Johnson for the mess in her pantry.""
Charlie would totally do that.
I'm very glad they were able to do this for him.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 19 . 10/24/2009
Remus...is SO DRUNK. Effing hilarious oh my goodness, that was GREAT.
| SWaddict1986 chapter 16 . 10/23/2009
That truly was a wonderful chapter. So many things jumped out that I enjoyed, that I can't comment on them all or else I'd be pasting the entire chapter here ;)
She really has broken the rules of her training but I can see that she doesn't regret it. It's a wonderful thing to see.