|Reviews for The Dilgar War|
| Peter Pienczuk chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Hi I had enjoyed reading the Chapter thoroughly and I believe you have used a good format in an interview with death walker. It enable the audience to be filled in on all the behind the scenes activity of the Dilgar. It also allows for a different perspective rather than good old earth. I hope you have the time to add bits about the mimbari war while the interviews continue. If there is one thing that i would change it is the fact that your Dilgar are perhaps too human. As there is no way to see any difference between the 2 races it is hard to have a suspension of disbelief. Something small like having them use body or sign language or having different/strange relationships with each other(perhaps using pheromones and being aware of it) to add a feeling of other worldliness. Still you set an interesting challenge for your self by writing from an alien perspective.
Can't wait for the rest of the war, good luck.
| mdman1 chapter 78 . 3/28/2012
Ouch! I actually felt sorry for the genocidal cat nazi there for a sec.
| mdman1 chapter 74 . 3/27/2012
Wow, that was very well done. I really liked how you portrayed those Dilgar soldiers, you actually managed to make them almost sympathetic, kudos to you sir.
| mdman1 chapter 61 . 3/26/2012
That way that ended was simply sublime, well done. Finally after 61 chapters Earthforce will fight the Dilgar!
| mdman1 chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
This is a good story, though I like the Dilgar POV better though.
| Azmo chapter 88 . 3/6/2012
Why did you kill Paul? NOOOOOO!
| still-guns chapter 16 . 2/28/2012
The sacrifice of the Persephone is one to truely revere at. Love it.
| 0-Mighty Bob -0 chapter 43 . 1/20/2012
Re-reading this for about the 8 millionth time while waiting for more of your latest stories...and the more I read bout Paul and the 'Space Race' crew the more it makes me think they'd get along great with the crew from 'Clear Skies', a similar bunch of misfits from a machina film series. Not to spam you or anything but if you have a few spare hours you can find the series on youtube or clearskiesthemovie . com. Only pointing it out cause the characters are so similar even though the 'Space Race' crew existed first.
Now that I'm done bothering you, gonna see if I can finish this monster in one sitting...
| pbscotland chapter 103 . 1/10/2012
I was irked a little by deviations from what I remember as canon but this irked me the most. Ja'hadur just has to die and the Vorlons killing her is the classic and most satisfying ending.
Other than that a great read and it does satisfy a few questions about the dilgar war.
| Chris chapter 104 . 12/7/2011
This was a truly wonderful story! I couldn't put it down! You should consider submitting it for adoption into true Babylon 5 Canon. With a few minor typo corrections, it could be a published Babylon 5 novel. Excellent work!
| pbscotland chapter 52 . 12/4/2011
I got to chapter 28 before checking ahead to see how many chapters there were I got to 70 and stopped counting. Really enjoying the story so far, which fills in some of the background.
| da sandz chapter 31 . 12/2/2011
ANother brilliant chapter and i neve saw the ending coming!
| opin chapter 28 . 12/2/2011
Awesome battle! Better than most you see in movies or novels!
| Transk53 chapter 63 . 8/22/2011
You turned a Thor into a Panzer II, kind of imagined a Challenger 2 or an Abrams. Anyway epic story. Would you consider a sequel?
| Transk53 chapter 48 . 8/15/2011
Fantastic entry for Sinclair. Not sure an old bird like the Spit would still be flying, but the roar of that Merlin would capture the audience. I commend you Lord of Misrule on that, brilliant.