Reviews for Darkness within
Frost Nova chapter 2 . 9/29/2005
Evil to the max, I like it.

BTW: I'm interested to see what Kyuubi has to do with this, but I believe I already have an Idea...

Anyways, it could be gramatically improved, but I really enjoy reading a fresh fiction like this.

7/10 Overall quality

8/10 enjoyment
Shadow of Angles chapter 2 . 9/28/2005
DUDE! This is an awsome fanfic! I love how you made Naruto beet the shit out of Sakura and Sasuke! That was so cool! Please continue this fanfic!
Peter Kim chapter 2 . 9/28/2005
I think you should torture Ino next.
Gigerfan chapter 2 . 9/28/2005
I'm likeing this feel of evil thing going on, it makes me all wram inside!
ranma hibiki chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
O_o; not to sound like im flamin or nothing. this is actually a pretty good fic for being so dark. i just wonder how many people will be angry after reading this KNOWING its a dark fic...meh D.K.D.C
Onibi chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
Damn you are evil! Which is awesome. Update soon.
Drolkrad chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
Lol dam i cant wait to see the reaction Sakura and the rest of the class has when they see Sasuke Rofl, Good job i really hate that bastard and i hope Naruto continue's to use his face as a punching bag, Anyways continue to keep up the awsome work and update soon later's;p
Perverted-Hokage chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
HOLI! i hate u! u made naruto evil! but now i luv u! (not in gai wai) u hurt sakura and sasuke (sorri to all sakura and sasuke fans out dere) BOYEAA!


dragonfly358 chapter 2 . 9/27/2005

i like your story!

i never knew Naruto can be so evil...
Stonebridge chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
this is a great story this is a good kind of evil
LbcLostKid chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
Dude I love it when your being evil UPDATE SOONER!
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
Now that is some good acting by our Naruto. At first I thought it was a clone of Naruto that Lord Evil created, like what he did with Zoey, but I like what you did to Sasuke.
Gigerfan chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
I'm loveing this evil Naruto!
silent sorrow chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
whoa...that's pretty cool. what happens next?
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
I always wondered what would happen if Naruto went to the other side. This was very well done, Sakura's fear was great and Naruto was wonderfully creepy. I hope you continue this.
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