Reviews for Darkness within
Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Wahahahahahahahahaha! Ata boy Naruto! It's about damn time you dropped the goody two-shoes act!
Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
ooh goodie. it was... nice.
Kyuubi666 chapter 4 . 12/2/2009
wow, split persona or something?
Robinwing14 chapter 9 . 8/21/2009
Oh man, when Naruto tricked Sakura and Ino into killing Sasuke...MAN, THAT WAS FRIGGIN' EVIL! Also evil when Naruto killed Kakashi and forced Sakura to ask him out! TEAM 7 BASHING IS AWESOME! WRITE MORE SUFFERING!
joe1402 chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
good 1st ch
Pub-blue92 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Aha theres nothing like a good bashing fic. Good job.
anemix chapter 10 . 3/1/2009
Your story is amusing. It is very fun to watch all the people who where mean to Naruto get beaten up. I think Naruto gave up too easily to Kyuubi though. He didn't even try to stop Kyuubi from killing his friends. Naruto is also too powerful. Even with Kyuubi, Naruto defeated the Hokage and Kakashi too easily. At the very least it should have taken longer and Naruto would have had to call upon more of the Kyuubi's powers and somewhat transformed. Even with the Red Cloud Jutsu, Naruto took care of the Hokage way too quickly and easily. All in all, your fic is amusing and dark, though not that serious.


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PS- because of a glitch, I had to rewrite this whole thing from memory because it wouldn't send
YYF96 chapter 9 . 2/11/2009
YYF96 chapter 3 . 2/11/2009
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 9 . 10/28/2008
Such beautiful suffering.
ashley chapter 10 . 1/18/2008
i hate this story so much im taking it out of my favorites since sakura and sasuske died
ashley chapter 9 . 1/18/2008
that was horrible i thout everyting was back to normal
narutodippy chapter 10 . 12/28/2007
OMG! This is the best story ever!
narutodippy chapter 2 . 12/28/2007
Naruto beating Sasuke to a pulp and metaly tormenting Sakura...


lol Jk, but that is difinetly entertaining
money apple chapter 5 . 7/30/2007
its spelled jutsu
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