|Reviews for Darkness within|
| Akira Stridder chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
ahahaha lol..good chapter!
| redswirl chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
ehh maybe you should base a whole story one bashing characters.
| IndependentDeath chapter 10 . 6/13/2006
Amazing. I thought it was just the Kyuubi taking over his body at night or something, but this is really creative, having him split off with Naruto's favorite technique.
Nice ending, Naruto/Kyuubi wins, everyone dies, the end. Nice Sakura bashing tactics, a good ending for her. You should definitely write more Naruto fiction, it's great inspiration.
| Beansmoker chapter 9 . 2/10/2006
To anyone who was turned off by the violence at the beggining of this fic, there is a nasty plot twist near the middle that makes it worth reading until the end.
By the way, I love the Paranoia Agent reference, I personally thought that that was a pretty good show.
| Beansmoker chapter 4 . 2/10/2006
AH! I don't like where this story is going, but I can't look away! Must not... no, I can't stop...Reading! Great Fic, It gets my Beansmoking Seal of Approval!
| Beansmoker chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
I had to log in for this. I never imagined Naruto as a wife beater, but I like the constructive way you've decided to release your hate against the world, instead of, say, beating any girls you find with pink hair yourself. Good Job, Buddy!
| Engelmohr2004 chapter 9 . 2/10/2006
Ya its a sad little story
| Engelmohr2004 chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
| ramesus chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
i am not big on nartuo but i liked it a bit big on action which the real story only shows when they have to
| VolpyroHarry chapter 12 . 12/23/2005
Yes more Sakura torture i really like ur naruto i like ur story i only just read though i havent read the Two for One story though but ill bet its good
| emperorprotects chapter 11 . 11/28/2005
Don't mind that garet is simply put an asshole.
Your grammer was good enough and so was everything else.
| emperorprotects chapter 12 . 11/28/2005
Make a little less sakura bashing in your next story and way more sasuke bashing...
| TheOtaku Akatsuki chapter 12 . 11/19/2005
man, you're good at this, but y stop now?
| Kuzo the Golem Pwner chapter 3 . 10/30/2005
Woah... One of my favourite ingredients...
M, heartbreak; so... delicious! ) Muhahahahahaha...
| Kuzo the Golem Pwner chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
YAYNESS FOR SAKU BASHING!
-Kuzo was here