Reviews for That Blonde One
YokuMiya chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
Umm was Roy about to puke or have a nosebleed an made it look like he was gonna puke?
YokuMiya chapter 5 . 8/29/2012
QQ I like Natalia And how Ed met her xD gotta know was that just for humor? Or was she one ofRoys "black book" girls?
YokuMiya chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
I got to where Ed started takin off the red coat then was laughing so much I had to stop for a while. Poor Ed doing that infront of so many ppl. I love the story and if it weren't for school I would finish it today :) but schoolhomeworkchoresno free time ._.
AlchemistOfSteel chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
Oh my god i love this.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/14/2012
Hahahahahahaha! Poor Havoc is probably gonna have gay nightmares...Hey! You should do a fic on poor Havocs trauma...hehehe
HavocsGoneGay chapter 6 . 7/14/2012
"He's a guy, he's a guy, he's a guy..."
My friends now think Im deranged after that psycotic burst of laughter.
mar-iguana chapter 13 . 4/15/2012
Oh.. My.. God.. Stripper Ed MMPH! Yum! XDD I enjoyed this too much.. -FANGIRL SQUEAL- THERES A SEQUEL OMG IMMA READ IT NOW!
kurosakiLenalee chapter 5 . 1/12/2012
I was busting a gut reading this! Poor Havoc, or lucky I guess. Great job!
ghjk chapter 3 . 6/18/2011
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING SO SHORT HE'S LIKE A POUND YOU DON'T BOTHER TO LOSE BECAUSE IT DOESN'T EVEN SHOW!"

Oh my gosh I'm dying! That is hilarious! You are soooo funny! XDDDDDD :D

I love this story!
pandas'n'kisses chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
omFREAKINGg
KittyMarks chapter 6 . 6/19/2010
Does Ed still have the automail? Because he's wearing pretty skimpy clothes that pretty much only cover his torso?

And is Al still in armour? Because why would they need the stone otherwise?

Ah, I'm a little bit confused! XD

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KittyMarks chapter 4 . 6/19/2010
This is complete and utter fanservice and I love you for it!

Hehehe, I haven't read another Stripper!Ed fic and this is both hillarious and interesting at the same time... poor, poor edward... we fans just love to screw with him sooooo much! XD
deceiving reality chapter 13 . 5/3/2010
i thought the story was really good, but i felt moved along too fast at the end. you should consider stretching it out a bit more with more scenes and encounters.
missjudged chapter 13 . 2/15/2010
I laughed my arse off when I read that the killers name was Eugene. I don't know why I found that so funny. But it was really funny for some reason. lol Good story it did end a little oddly but you say you have a sequeal up and this was written a while ago. So anyway good job. I liked it. lol
xXxSnakebites chapter 13 . 1/19/2010
mental image of ed as a stripper. hot. )

i like
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