Reviews for White Shadows
Rini Tsukino chapter 7 . 10/16/2008
Thi is an... interesting story. It certainly has it's darker points, but I actually don't mind them so much. I'm looing forward to finding out more about Anima, she's one of the less known characters in this. Emera, too. Though, i just cn't help but dislike the 'dark voice' she's got going... Maybe that's 'cause Savyna's one of my favorite characters. She starts off weird though... Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this one, too!

Rini
Angelic Samurai chapter 5 . 4/29/2008
Wow...

I never read the whole story yet, but this by far my favorite chapter!

And if only this is what really happened...that would have been awesome!
Angelic Samurai chapter 4 . 4/29/2008
YAY! I'm getting closer to the betrayl part! ( did I spell betrayl right?...hm. )

Anyway, I REALLY enjoyed this chapter! D
Angelic Samurai chapter 3 . 4/29/2008
...

I don't like the two of them, I'm saying this now.

But something tells me they're going to die...so if they do...yay! D
Angelic Samurai chapter 2 . 4/29/2008
Really? i never would have guessed, this was so depressing! but then again, who doesn't like a little angst?...Well, A-LOT of angst, but whatever.

Awesome chapter! D
Angelic Samurai chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Wow...freaky...

But I thought it was a good prolouge! Something tells me this story will be very dark...but oh well! I like dark stuff! D
Holy Spork chapter 7 . 4/23/2006
Xelha and Emera are off to save Savyna, and Anima is sick. And what's the 'incident'? (There's always an 'incident' of some sort...)

Great chapter. It'll be interesting to see how Xelha and Emera interact. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ice Seraphim chapter 4 . 4/19/2006
I'm so far behind! Anyway, really good chapter, I especially liked the little petty feelings of jealousy between Vera and Melodia. The brief summary of the game was really effective as well.

I'll try to get reviews to the rest of the chapters as soon as possible. Good luck in your writing! _

-Katrina Ice Angel of Darkness
Rebbe chapter 7 . 4/18/2006
This was a really cool chapter. I love that quote about the cobra... and the part where the bright voice strangles the dark one actually made me laugh out loud. Emera's a coolish character... and yes, a little Savyna-ish...

Brilliant chapter, par usual. Fantastical job!
The Shadowfox Mistress chapter 7 . 4/17/2006
Wow.
Holy Spork chapter 6 . 3/19/2006
So... how long is 'eventually'?

Okay! Okay! I'll wait... Anyway, this chapter has a great big, flashing, neon 'DISASTER' everywhere. I'm not really surprised though. You did say that there would not be a happy ending. Can't wait to see what comes out of this tangle. (Or what happens next in Crimson Rain, whichever comes first.)
Luna-Starr chapter 6 . 3/19/2006
Wow...So Anima entered their world? as usual, I'm a fan of your work Keep it going, your such a talented writer. And poor Xelha...
Sticky Wins chapter 6 . 3/17/2006
Yes, this is very interesting so far. I don't mind the OC either. I don't know why people hate OC's so much. XD Lord knows i add enough myself... But anyway, i love how Vera has turned out. And the relationship between Vera and Kalas. Very cool. :D
pocketcucco chapter 6 . 3/17/2006
Pretty good. X3 Yes, I'm a newbie to your fanfic...I'm enjoying it. Keep it up!

- - Wings of Heart - -
Marisa-san chapter 6 . 3/15/2006
I absolutely adore this story. It is so well thought out, and so original. You are an amazingly talented author with a lot of potential. Godd, I love Baten Kaitos, and this is like, one of the best BK fics there are. An amazing job.. and I can see why you wouldn't want anyone to copy your idea. ;D As much I love sad stories... (I also LOVE Xelha! She's my favourite character..) I couldn't stand having this end sad. I mean, I do want it to, but I don't want it to hurt Xelha. :'( Oh, I'm so torn. Write more as soon as possible! I can't wait to read more.
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