|Reviews for Shot Through the Heart|
| nem chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
You did a really good job, and I don't say that very often. In this case I really liked your story as a oneshot. Sure things were a little (just a litle) out of charecter, but that's not really a big deal considering you did it as a one shot. I think it makes it a little harder. Good job though
| somedaycelebrity chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
im glad you didnt break it up into chaptres b/c some writers foregt all about the story and never finish it and im glad you did it wass great i cant wait to read more from you!
| AntisocialButterfly13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
That was good, but it would've been nice if you had put a little bit more detail about the investigation. Otherwise, it was awesome!
| GUrl chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
HEy thats great good job you have some good writing in you but thanks for not breaknig it up in chapters its better that way. But good for a 4 hours but u did a good story
| Writerbitch92 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
taht was really cute
| a proud geekfreak chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
wait a tick, Elliot doesn't go off often? what the heck you've been smoking? Elliot goes off a lot!
anyway, I thought this was an awesome story! I'm so proud of you that you get a hug tomorrow! I'm sorry I wasn't in school, but this was an awesome story! kudos for you and typing it all up in one night! rock on sister woman!
| Lisa chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Well, it's amazing:) I enjoyed reading it very much:)