|Reviews for I'm Right Here|
| rocketman chapter 28 . 19h ago
He Better Not Die. I Am Warning You Right Now.
| magic chapter 29 . 12/30/2013
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS CLIFFHANGER IS SO EVIL! I just read this entire story in one day, and i love it. Its just so... AHHHH! Geosvejdyevwmsoxg this is amazing, i love the characters and the plot and man u are an extraordinary writer so please finish this? Or at least post something about how the story would have ended? Thank u, i love u and all ur work. Thank u.
| clouddd1 chapter 29 . 10/5/2013
Please continue this story please !
| Guest chapter 29 . 8/10/2013
REALLY?! I just read 29 super awesome chapters for a CLIFFHANGER ? GOD DAMN
| VeVe2491 chapter 29 . 7/20/2013
| Ruxi23 chapter 29 . 7/2/2013
Even if i know you will bot continue it , i love the story ! Please update
| usuihentai727 chapter 29 . 6/23/2013
HE WOKE UP! GOOD! GREAT! EXCELLENT! HE FINALLY WOKE UP! I'm so happy!
But...you're probably gonna make something tragic and have him die in the end, right?
I hope not, poor Zack. And I agree with him. There can't be Zack without a Cody.
I hope everything goes back to normal, or that all what happened was a dream...although it would be kind of...cruel. So I would stick with the option of Cody going back to normal!
Love the story, I even shed a few tears. And that's saying something. I don't cry, especially by stories. But you, along with another story I read called "The Burn of Phoenix", made me shed tears.
| First Hero of Olympus chapter 29 . 6/5/2013
Okay, this story is amazing. Seriously, this is hands-down my favorite story in the Suite Life category, maybe even on the entire site. I love it.
I really like the way you've projected the characters- they're different then on the show, but that's good. Especially with Zack- you've shown that he really cares for Cody. I mean, obviously he does, he did go to "rescue" Cody from math camp, but this is much more extreme. I especially like the whole thing with the life support- how Carey wanted Zack to see that Cody wouldn't be okay and he refused to accept it, although he was slowly loosing hope inside. But... I'm not really sure, seeing that I've never been in a coma or known someone in one, but I kind of think three days is a rather short time period to decide that he wouldn't get better.
I'm extremely happy that Cody woke up, although it doesn't seem like he's okay. It seems like he would be, though, since in the parts in his point of view the understands what people are saying to him and everything. But, here, you made him really confused and disorientated. It would be interesting to see another Cody point of view about him waking up.
Finally, is Cody going to be okay? I get the impression that you're not going to end this story happily, so what's going to happen to him? Will he stay brain-dead forever, or will he die... again?
Please update soon! I know the series is over, so you might not have much inspiration, but I really hate it when authors abandon really good fics.
| missMien chapter 29 . 5/29/2013
hey uhm.. I don't if this will help but i will try. this is one of the most beautifull stories i have read since I.. well.. recovered. it's nice to read something like this. It brings sometimes harsh memories but I don't mind. Now when he finally woke up.. it gave me this nice feeling. but then I saw that this was the last chap. please update! I really feel connected with this story! (only I didn't get hit by a car. But my parents considered pulling the plug. they told me. but only because i asked) now I don't want to obligate you. Do not pity me. Why I tell you this? It's because it's anonymous. In real life I can't talk about it. so here I am.. I'm just giving you a reason to update. It may actually help people! Oh god... i sound so.. stupid.. but please update? thanks in advance. :)
| Grace chapter 29 . 2/28/2013
Really good but really sad poor cody sleeping the whole time.
| rockybluewigs chapter 29 . 2/4/2013
WHAT? Oh hell to the mother-loving, swasomeness of a fanfiction no.
How dare you simply stop writing this without any insight as to what happens? I mean, seriously, you just kept us in the open for almost four years? Are you mad? I'm okay with one year—two years, pushing it. But it's 2013 for christsake. Don't you think we need to find out the ending?
Since then our twins have grown up, and Suite Life on Deck is over! Even D&C attend a close-by college from me (actually, NYU is pretty far from Queens, NY, but still.) Oh my god! Even when I discovered this website in 2010 was this story ceased to update. You must have cancelled your email alerts to notice that you have over 880 reviews on this site, demanding—both nicely and mean—for you to post your last chapter or last few chapters. Ugh. Why. Just why.
Now time for the seriousness:
I've seen so many fics on this website where the person writes and writes a very well-written fic, with zero plot holes, or clichés, and suddenly they stop due to a hiatus—whether temporary or permanent. However, temporary becomes permanent, and we never hear from them ever again. And it's sad, because no one likes an author who stops writing a fic that actually draws attention towards others who want to look for some originality. So this story is definitely not uncommon. Whether you have a serious problem with your computer or you're still working on your studies or something, or you completely forgot about Fanfiction, girl, you just can't with this.
I have to admit, when I discovered this site, things were different then than it is now, so maybe you did come back and noticed the changes, like the 'clean sweep' of fics (I was too busy with depression to care much about it) and then got discouraged. I'm probably not one of those people who sends you constant PM's (I'm as socially inept/awkward as it gets) but maybe you need a very long PM and a review lol. Yup, I'm just as lazy so I'm just going to stick with the review.
Okay now for the review (eff me, I know!)
I am fascinated with the connection you made with our favorite twins in this fic; at points I found myself in awe when Zack felt the same pain that Cody did. Twins like that are very close... so close that it's almost borderline-incestuous. But since I'm not going there. Anyway, I found Zack's selfishness to be tolerable; anyone who has a very close connection with their siblings, parents, relatives, friends, or significant others would say the same exact thing. I actually had a debate about this topic a while back in my second day of college lit class, so I noticed a bit of a... parallel? when I read each part.
Part of me wanted Cody to die though; I know, mean, but I think the summary of the story led me to believe that he was going to die. Humph, since he's alive and not a complete vegetable (or is he?) then part of me would think that me may not recover much from the operation. That other part of me had hope; since Zack and Cody are the pair of twins that have a special connection, part of Zack will die if Cody died, and I wouldn't be surprised if Zack died himself from the deep depression of his deceased brother. And since that wouldn't be right for anyone to go through that, that their other half died, then yeah, that piece of hope stayed within me whenever I read each chapter.
However, I'm a little mad at the way their father is portrayed; in the show, Kurt is still that supportive man that comes sporadically for his twin sons, not much like other fathers who divorce their wives and have the child burden. Some fathers cut and run, and it seems that Kurt in this story basically does that. I mean, since this was written during the first season, I understand that he isn't as supportive as how the writers captivated him to be. And I'm actually fond of Sam; she seems like a harmless person until provoked. She has to deal with Carey's wrath, so of course she's going to feel like she's just a burden, but Sam's just trying and I see that. Maybe I need to stop siding with characters that maybe others don't like lol.
So, speaking for myself, and practically the whole Suite Life fandom, please come back. I also read your other story, and that one made me cry way more than it should (maybe I was over-thinking it; I was reading tragedies all day and apparently your other story struck a chord, plus I relate to his failure; that was me in eleventh grade basically) but seriously. I'm not going to PM people (I have a life, and writing intensive courses, and writing stories of my own) but yo. Seriously—I mean siriusly—I'm mad that you left us in an empty anticlimax. :(
| StrawberryBuro chapter 29 . 1/26/2013
Alright. I think I'm not only speaking for myself but for everyone here,
Update This Fanfiction. Please.
Like, seriously. This is just...so good. From all of the fanfictions I've ever read (A whole lot xD), this has got to be the best one. I mean it. I mean, I feel sorry for all of your readers. They read this fantastic fanfiction, then find out the author hasn't updated in 4. Years. I mean, I understand if you've been having problems with your computer or something like that, but this is just too long. One of my biggest pet peeves is people who come up with a wonderful story, come a long way with it, then just stop updating just because. Now, I'm not saying you're one of those people, because if you actually wanted to update it some time ago but couldn't due to some issues, then I totally understand. :)
So basically, what I'm trying to say is, update as soon as you can. :)
I've favorited and followed the story, and you. Please, don't let us down. c:
Also, I'm not trying to be harsh or anything. I myself, haven't updated any of my fanfictions on other sites for a while, we just really want an update to this fantastic fanfiction. :)
I have faith you will update. I'll be checking!
| Ivy000 chapter 29 . 1/22/2013
Okay, trying not to panic... I'm going to write this like a letter.
Hi! I'm a reader of your story. I'd just like to let you know that it kind of ANNOYS readers when you PROMISE to update and then DON'T for 4 years AT THE MOST IMPORTANT PART!
Okay, I'm done.
| Ivy000 chapter 26 . 1/22/2013
STOP MAKING ME CRY!
Actually, never mind. This is too beautiful for you to stop.
| Ivy000 chapter 25 . 1/22/2013
Is that what he said?