|Reviews for Happy Birthday Mr Grayson|
| The O.W.M.I.N chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
This is good. Please, I am a huge BB/Rae fan. I want to read all the naughty things Raven dose to Mr. Logan. And please have Rae torture Logan. I love it when a person teases there partner. It's so funny seeing them suffer. P.S. I wish I was Logan right now.
| RobinStarfire chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Great job!I loved it!
| yanagichyan chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
three words... WOW. DO MORE!
| inuandrave7 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
WOW, this is the best One-shot i have EVER read, love the lemon, your the best on writing it, you make it so real, hope you write more stories, you are so on my favorites.
| StickLad chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
| Ladiee101 chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
wow cool...ere...keep up the good work
| windscargirl chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Dude that was like so f%&* good! You have to totally write another chapter if you don't I'll like find you and make you write another story, just so everyone can see how well you can write!
| Ahhhhh chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
ah! You wrote this story? Just to let u know, i thought someone else wrote this story! Well who knew the Author of As the World Falls Down! well, this is a really nice story! I love this one shot! This is the best oneshot ever! Please keep up the work!
| Girl who doesnt want to login chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Hi! this is an amizing story. I just want to give you a hug. YOu put a lot of effort in here. Nice job1
| Kamen Rider Chrome chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Please add the Gar and Vic scenes! Pls! Wanna see!
| Burgandy Pirate chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
omg i loved it!
| koryana chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
I like it, good job!
keep up the good work!
| none chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
please oh god tell us what happens with vic and gar!
Oh, and good story...
| xbroken fairytalex chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
wow, Amazing story! (looks at other story) forget it, your 2nd best lemon, (looks at this story) now your 1st best lemon one-shot!