Reviews for The Life Given
Mew3692002 chapter 3 . 3/1/2007
I knew it was a ratatta! So a professor (probably Oak) got him huh? This should be interesting, I liked how you differenciated the life of a ratatta from the life of a caterpie, that was a really nice detail to bring more realism into your story! Good so far!
Mew3692002 chapter 2 . 3/1/2007
Oh I think that they are ratatta! That makes sense now and what they were eating was probably ice cream! Your main character has some weird thoughts though, pretty good story so far!
Mew3692002 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Pretty cool story so far, but what I can't understand is what kind of Pokemon these creatures are.
Tanaki Wolf chapter 3 . 2/28/2007
I like it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Psionicnemesis chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
interesting idea

Are you going to write more?