|Reviews for Families I: Reunion|
| Donna chapter 10 . 2/17/2009
this is a cool story i so think you should finish it off it's brillent soo much better that most of the crap that writers write today
| Treeonice chapter 10 . 8/19/2007
DUDE! UPDATE THE G.D. STORY! THIS IS GOOD!
| Katee1994 chapter 10 . 9/5/2006
it will be the last chapter? :-( well hurry up and update plz
| chicagonebananas chapter 10 . 7/12/2006
Dan would get on my nerves as well. great chapter by the way! update soon plase! XD
| Emma C Oliver chapter 9 . 6/27/2006
awsome story awsome job please keep up the great work and please try to update as soon as u can, also is cyborg gonna be paired up with anyone? i think he should be paired up with bumble bee but that is just a suggestion well anyway keep up the great work
| chicagonebananas chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
great chapter once again! update soon!
| chicagonebananas chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
it's okay that it took so long. don't worry about i haven't updated a fic since i published it back in i think December... so yeah! but anyways, it was great. eventhough it was short. but sometimes short chapters are great!
i have a bit of constructive cristism:
proof read! i found a few grammer errors that could have been caught by proof reading yourself. or you could find someone to proof read for you. i learned in my yearbook class this year that it's sometimes better to have someone proof it for you becasue you get exposed to it so much that you won't catch as much.
so yeah, all in all it was great and i can't wait for more!
| Emma C Oliver chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
its okay, well great story and please update as soon as you can
| forgetMEalways chapter 6 . 4/8/2006
dick is do forgetful!
| FadedPhantom chapter 7 . 3/26/2006
great job! keep it up and please update soon. :-D
| drivenunder66 chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
this is cool keep it up mann and update soon
| Katee1994 chapter 7 . 2/12/2006
cool! cool! great chapter! update as soon as you can. And if you can make the chapters a little longer ok? plz? and GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!
| skye668 chapter 7 . 2/9/2006
ha ha! funny about the end. very nice discription and detail. i got into the feeling. please continue
| chicagonebananas chapter 7 . 2/8/2006
it may have been short, but it was still good. you really got me to picture the tower in it's sad, sorry, shape. please update soon!
| Italia46 chapter 7 . 2/8/2006
this is really good! i'm looking forward to the update! I think it would be cool if Slade showed up, or something like that.