|Reviews for A Second Death|
| HardToScare211 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Sweet and sad and slightly strange. Well done.
| Nightingale Tinuviel chapter 2 . 11/16/2005
that was very good.
| storyshark2005 chapter 2 . 11/4/2005
lol, storyshark :D
| Flokati chapter 2 . 10/29/2005
But. . . that can't be IT! You didn't get to the part about China & the Wong family!
| Flokati chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
OMG. I never knew that Siri was Chinese. But she must be, since Obi has proven her "wong".
So she was lifted from ancient China as an infant when the Jedi discovered she was force-sensitive? They must have really wanted her bad to have travelled so far to our galaxy to take her. I bet her parents missed her terribly. Do you suppose they worked the story into any Chinese legends? There's a couple about peasant girls and emperors that might fit. What do you think?
I would like a chapter exploring what Mr. & Mrs. Wong's life was like after the Jedi took their daughter, and what happens after Obi proves her to be Wong? Does she go searching for her birth parents? That would be way cool.
| arliddian chapter 2 . 10/20/2005
Wow, that was excellent. Such an interesting concept. Nice job!
| Caitiri chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
I enjoyed the story. It would be cool though if Obi-Wan like took Siri away with him aganist her will and see the drama that would come from that. Keep writing!