|Reviews for Blonde from American Beauty|
| iheartLink chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
I will admit that I wasn't expecting to like this so much since Angela was not my favorite character, but...you did fantastic with this poem! Yes, there was one grammar error that I saw. "To new to know" should be "Too new to know." Not trying to nitpick, just opening room for improvement. :) Anyway, beautiful job!
| Weezy815 chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Very well said about Angela there.
| Angela chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Her name is Angela Hayes.
| ashlee chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
| AmintaWithARose chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Your rhythm is a little off...it kind of stumbles on itself at times. But then again, poems don't always have perfect rhythm, and sometimes that's the point. You have good imagery and character analysis, though. Well done. It's good to see some poetry on this site :)
| The Dark Word chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
It fits the movies name,beauty.
| The Goddess of Night chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Wow. I had no idea what I was in for when I clicked on the link for your story thing. I actually like it. You are quite the magical poet. Nice work!
| Histswot chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Spot on character analysis. Well done.
| arohalove chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Who cares if you didn't remember her name? This is about the impression she made on you and you totally captured it. Wonderfully done. I really love it!
| ann chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Wow that was a great poem. You summed up Angela's character perfectly.
| Andy chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Yeah, her name was Angela, idiot.
| Fatale83 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Short, sweet, and cute.
| me chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Her name is Angela. Cool poem
| HannaSun chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
It's good, I really liked the way you wrote it.
| SAMATUT chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I like this one a lot. It flows very well, and shows a depth of insight into the character as well as many young girls. Excelent job.