|Reviews for Lake of Fire|
| Jessic chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I love this story! You should add more! Maybe a romance between some girl he met or something!
| ozma914 chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
As a firefighter, the only problem I had was that when the building collapsed, the rest of the team wouldn't have stood there - they'd have grabbed tools and headed in to make a rescue. Most fire departments even post teams on standby at regular fires (called RIT teams), just to make firefighter rescues if they become necessary. However, too many firefighters standing around is also my only problem with some scenes in the actual show, so that might be where you got it from.
As a writer, I found it to be a great story - good characterization, nice action sequences. And Tommy would be just the type to stick around after death and torment his friends. :-) I'd be happy to see further chapters of the story; you've got plenty of territory to cover, between Tommy's ghosthood and the fact that the team is still in the Big Easy.