|Reviews for Testing|
| MercuryMessenger chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
Much better this way Good Job! :)
| willotaku9000 chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
I like this way better
| Not G. Ivingname chapter 2 . 12/31/2007
good job, rewrite ansewered afew questions not made clear
| The Mad shoe1 chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
| TopKat chapter 2 . 10/22/2005
the non dialogue way was better. yayness for fluffiness!
| kool-shoes chapter 2 . 10/11/2005
please update soon
| Aime Atem Itsumo chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
this is a cute story. i liked it both ways, with and without narration. in fact, i think that just dialouge made it more interesting, and you wrote it well, so it turned out great! good job!
| Account-Is-No-Longer-Active chapter 2 . 10/3/2005
Very, very nice. I can picture it better this way. I like it, it's a nice little one shot.
| Account-Is-No-Longer-Active chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Very nice, I like it. but you've done a rewrite with scene thingys so I'm ganna go read that and then review completely.
| Tammy Tamborine chapter 2 . 10/2/2005
Lol, very good!
| boringperson chapter 2 . 10/2/2005
the rewrite was really ok writesome more soon
| loaned chapter 2 . 10/2/2005
Good job on the re-write, it's very good!
| loaned chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Yup, don't we all? Anyway, good job on the pointlessness and keep up the good work!
| Mystic Golden Wolf chapter 2 . 10/1/2005
actually, I liked it better without the actions... I am a sucker for dialog only... it takes more brain power and imagination.
| Digital98 chapter 2 . 10/1/2005
It is cute cute