Reviews for To Break A Pact
Sora of The Village of Sound chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Wow.
xDeliasanax chapter 8 . 10/28/2005
Wow that took long enough! I prefer humor/romance stories, but I'll keep reading To Break a Pact as long as you wish to write it
xDeliasanax chapter 7 . 10/15/2005
well i had to skim read this, but nice chappy! longer than the others, with more depth, and a nice twist.
That Crazy Stalker chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Good, I really enjoyed iT!
xDeliasanax chapter 6 . 10/12/2005
but what did harry do to draco? i'm confused...

good chapter, but stop posting one a day and make them longer!
xDeliasanax chapter 5 . 10/12/2005
Why do you call Remus "Lupin"?

Why'd you change the title? You know, you should capatilize the title like so: "To Break a Pact".

Hmm, there's one huge problem with this chapter: it would be slightly obvious that Harry wasnt Voldemort, especially to someone as smart as Hermione. See ya tomorrow!
xDeliasanax chapter 4 . 10/11/2005
you have the same problem i used to...you rush through scenes...

add detail...

i like the turns this is taking, though. is it gonna be r/hr, and h/g?

REVIEW ALMOST PARADISE!
xDeliasanax chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
LONGER! Or die...

Bellatrix is an awesome character, don't you agree? hehe. anyway, it needs to be longer...
xDeliasanax chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
you know, you can call me taryn...i dont care...anyway, you really should read HBP...you'd understand a lot of things better.

okay, i liked this chapter too; you've added some humor which is great.
xDeliasanax chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
hmm trinya, a bit short, but that's to be expected...jk lol. anyways, it's a good start, you're very descriptive. go review EVERY chapter of Almost Paradise...then i'll get over a 100 reviews!

write more soon!