|Reviews for Marionette|
| LukeAndLorelai Brucas Fan chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Aww. So beautiful. I have no other words
| helaluvE chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
i loved the writting in this. precise yet blurry. i loved it. it's funny because i never read a story where Jess crashes Rory's wdding and object... nicely done :)
| 000000oooooo00000000 chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Really amazing, perfectly written!
| coffee-addicted chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Warm. Passionate. Perfect.
| milovroxmysox chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
It was good, but I had a hard time understanding what was going on, I understand that someone objected and that it was a wedding. But, the time and... I'm so confused I don't know how to explain my confusion!
| petitos grasshoppertje chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Wow! I loved it!
| tragicallyepic chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
amazing. truly amazing. again, u have me hooked to another one of your stories. i have read all of your gilmore girls fanfic and i can say that they just get better and better and i can actually feel the emotions going on in the stories and i love it! another great one-parter!
| ArdentTVFiend chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
| unfold chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Beautiful. That's the only word that's coming to mind right now. The imagery was fantastic. The colors. Just, perfect.
| Certifiably Insane chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow...this was...wow. Amazing.
| Dione Robertson chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Good short story, full of feelings, and color. enough words to feel the passion, but didn't play with the whys of
it all...some things you just want to view, and this fic was one of them...THANKS!
| kessemm chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
ok, I didn't get all of it
who was rory marrying? jess or someone else?
I like this sentence-"teeth meet the innocent skin of botton lip" realy... lyrical
| someone5 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
| deeper-thoughts chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Very poetic. I like poetry. :) I guess it's good cause you never really said who it was... so people can interpret it how they want, but we all know Rory SHOULD BE with Jess. ;) lol. Great Writing!
| waxingmoon chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I had to read it twice...I understand what's going on, but the details are fuzzy. Not that it's necessarily a bad thing.
I always love your oneshots. This one is no different.