Reviews for Prison Keys
KindaSpaceyButNotReally chapter 1 . 4/2
Wow... This really gives an interesting perspective on Hanabi and Hinata's relationship. This is great as an AU fic, but tbh (canonically speaking) Hanabi's a lot more light hearted - or at lest, she pretends to be. Idk, maybe that's just my general dislike for NejiHina swaying my opinion... Great job!
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 3/8
Huh. Wow. Hinabi has a sad and fixated life.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
And that's why Narutoverse produced so many people like Itachi.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
...No. This felt exactly like how they would end up.
Midan no Hatake chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Fascinating, because I plan to have Hanabi in my own story and this was an excellent source of inspiration for her.
ilikebluepineapples chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
What a fantastic final paragraph.
Cameron Young chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This was the kind of creepy that makes you shudder. Kind of like that one Bubbles(PPG)/Orochimaru pairing. Good job.
BlueGate chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I enjoyed this fic. It was interesting to follow, and not overly long to need more substance to it. Have to admit though, it was the description that initially caught my attention. Hyuuga eat their own children. Sounded bizarre enough to demand I at least look at it.

So anyway, thanks for the read :)
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
really didn't like this one

first off neji hates her

second any hinata in a relationship (not forced to by daddy) with a guy who is not Naruto is an OC in mind
terrorofthehighway chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I liked Hanabi's description of death, and the way everything revolves around Hinata.
RedBrunja chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Fabulous. I love the details of the death, and your Hanabi voice.
xXRainbowxXxRebelXx chapter 1 . 4/9/2008

I very much liked your story.

It facinated me to see someone write like that.

Perhaps you could do me a small favor.

Perhaps you could read a chapter of one of my stori3es, and give me your opinion on my writing.

I would appriciate it.

Thank you.
Amoenus Cordis chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Wow dark... i like it
ThornWrath chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
loved it... ill review it more detailed latter gotta go to sleep

write some more!
RofS chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Hn. I don't like the mentions of incest. Like, the NejiHina? Because it doesn't seem very likely, unless Hinata never loved anyone after giving up on Naruto and is simply fulfilling her duty to the clan and the Branch and Main Houses by marrying Neji to unite the two Houses?

But, anyways, I kind of like and kind of don't like the way you viewed Hanabi. It makes sense, a little bit, and maybe that's kind of how she really is, but -shrug- I don't know. I just don't LIKE it.

And, um, if you don't mind - could you possibly make up something other than politically correct, polite, meaningless crud for the author's note?
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