Reviews for Fall Apart
murmure etoile chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Wonderful oneshot, beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!
Scourge of Nemo chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Another great piece...

Lifeguard chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Wow. That was intense, but amazing to read.
jbr12476 chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Aw...that was so lovely. I loved this story and that Griss won't let her "Fall Apart" Great job.
sara kicks ass chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Loved it,Sara and Grissom were written very well.
CSIFan4Life chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Good fic.

VioletVision chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
I like!
leddy chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Beautifully written. That was definitely a good catalyst for bringing those two together.
And Also With You chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
This was so haunting and beautifully written. I kept waiting to hear him tell her he wouldn't let her fall apart. I also like that they didn't end up having sex for some reason. It seemed more...I don't know, touching? Anyway, excellent job! I love your writing.
Denese25 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Beautiful. I wouldask for a sequel, but you can't improve on perfection.
Lanta chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Wow that was not at all what I expected when I read the challenge... it was much much better :-)
taramis chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Oh lovely! I especially like the line "Maybe it’s the loss of what should have been, what can never be now.” by Grissom cause he can be sensitive and insightful! I know he can! It's just his love for Sara blinds ans binds him. ::sighs::

I don't suppose a chocolate bribe would encourage you to write part 2? I'd love to see what happens when they wake up.
omaetoy chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wonderfully perfect