Reviews for The Loner Who Is Not Alone
majorblub chapter 6 . 12/31/2005
Good 8/9 when will you up date.
maddie chapter 3 . 10/4/2005
sounds good.
Khori chapter 2 . 10/3/2005
There! Much better.

This chapter has a nice, swift pace to it. Your decriptions are well done and very clear. Make sure you keep everyone in character and you'll be all set! I can't wait to see who the new Rider is.

Update soon!

-Khori
Khori chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Yeah, it's cool to have the ledgened as the first chapter, but we already know the ledgend. It doesn't give us anything new to grasp. Not to mention you didn't put any sort of disclaimer on there, or credit to Brom or Christopher Paolini for writing that.

Sorry if this sounds harsh, and I hope that I can see something of your writing in the next chapter.

-Khori
DarkJobo chapter 2 . 10/2/2005
wow! this is so cool! i really like your story and where you're taking it, but i was a little confused when you didn't further explain the fight with the ra'zac (are they dead?) but other that that i love it!

(p.s. eragon's cousin's name is roran, i think)