Reviews for Unnoticed
animelea chapter 9 . 7/6/2010
awwwwwww this was a nice story keep writing
Jollypants Silvers chapter 21 . 10/4/2009
officially, you are awesome _
Jollypants Silvers chapter 17 . 10/4/2009
wo! it was good lol
Jollypants Silvers chapter 16 . 10/4/2009
...why the hell haven't you made a part two? I WANNA KNOW WHAT THE FUGNUGGETS HER SURPRISE WAS!
Jollypants Silvers chapter 15 . 10/3/2009
"and to top off my misfortune sundae a massive headache for a cherry. HA! cherry my ass." XD
Jollypants Silvers chapter 10 . 10/3/2009
oo lala xD
Jollypants Silvers chapter 9 . 10/3/2009
you see i liked this one cus riza isn't hospitalized xD
Jollypants Silvers chapter 8 . 10/3/2009
stop making riza hospitalized! DDXX!
Jollypants Silvers chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
there should have been sex XDD! jk jk.. lol i kill myself XD! lol yeah but i liked it lol
Jollypants Silvers chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
aheh, hehehehheheeh X3!
Daniel chapter 17 . 10/1/2006
that was the one of the greatestloves letters i have ever read. keep up the good writing
twinklestar120 chapter 21 . 5/26/2006
Yay, I'm glad you ended on such a nice note, I would have shot myself if it had ended with one of those angsty ones. These are all really beautiful, and the characterisation is perfect. Well done!

Oh and by the way, the past tense of "lie" is "lay" not "lied". I noticed that you did this several times.

Apart from that, they were all really good, and I shall go have a look at some more of your stuff!
KagomeMarie chapter 21 . 4/20/2006
awe its just so sweet *cries from happiness*
KagomeMarie chapter 17 . 4/20/2006
awe so sweet *cries*
Kuragari75 chapter 21 . 4/8/2006
nicely done... you are a talented writer! I hope to read more of your stories! later,

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