Reviews for Before our very own eyes
Taeniaea chapter 21 . 7/16/2012
good story Poor Momo :((
Alex chapter 8 . 2/7/2006

That was an attempt to converse in your language.

Capslock is NOT cruise control for cool.

I hope you get AIDS.
ally chapter 19 . 1/2/2006
I read the preview for the next chapter.

Is that based on the anime S-cry-ed?
Ess Tii Eph Yu chapter 15 . 12/7/2005
A shame that your special can't-do-wrong shallow self-insert Mae's super powers can't improve the horrendous spelling, grammar, and writing style of this textual dung heap.
Ess Tii Eph Yu chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
You know, it's kinda hard to buy the idea of your blatant Mary Sue twit Mae being accepted because of her incredible genius when everything you write for her sounds like something a drunk high school bimbo cheerleader would say and do.

Or is that just an intentionally accurate reflection of the profession and intelligence of the author?
Reiko x 3 chapter 16 . 12/2/2005
Reiko: I must confess that I prefer chaos/KOS-MOS pairing, but this is still pretty damn good. I like it.

Dark: The next chapter is going to be interesting...

Rei: Multi-person flashback! - And evil gnosis boss thingy. T_T It kept killing me...

Reiko: Yes and that robot thing in Proto Merkabah kept killing Stone-Liger. Update soon please. Ja ne!
Mimikai chapter 15 . 11/28/2005
amanda, you have yet another great story, cant wait to see more, see you at school

Godess-of-Darkness chapter 10 . 11/6/2005
o.O great chapter so are choas and Mae going to get together or is a fling? well anyway kkep up te good work!
Soemone chapter 9 . 11/4/2005
Tis very good! keep up the good work! cant wait to read the next chapter
ally chapter 6 . 10/22/2005
Cool Mae's mom is the U.R.T.V's

mother then that must make Mae like

a sister to them.
ally chapter 4 . 10/6/2005
good chapters and thanks for

mae's description.:)
ally chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Not bad so far. I was wondering though

can you give a description of what Mae

looks like?
Ying Fa Xang chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Wow...This is good! Keep going! _-