Well I'm gonna read on

A beautiful story. I loved it. Honestly I'd have liked it to be a longer history. HAHAH I loved it that much. But I understand your motives for finishing it like you did.
I have a request though... I WOULD LOVE to Translate your story into Spanish. So, if you'd like, contact me please. It will be an honor.
Have a good day /night wherever you are ;)

I liked how you incorporated philosophy into this story! Gives it a different, realistic view from the norm. Thanks for your hard work and keep it up!

Loved it! It was deep and all the philosophy and thought behind everything was great. Different and refreshing. And I looooved the end. It was real (not a real reason to like it, but I dont like happy shinning endings). Thanks!

Beautifully written and I loved your practical approach to the story...After all life isn't a bed of roses right ? Keep up the good work.

Pretty good story :) it goes a bit fast but other wise enjoyable to read

This was an amazingly poetic chapter and by the end I was sobbing. Your writing is astounding.

Wow...just wow.
It was so good it kept me awake until 7:30 (am) and I don't regret it AT ALL.
Thank you (:

Read this in one sitting and frankly have been left reeling and on the edge at every turn of the page. My head and my heart is a jumbled mess..and it's all your fault. You've conveyed how broken they were after losing everything they value the most and i guess that's why I'm drawn to this that i haven't been able to stop until I've finished and was able to bask in every single word. I can't thank you enough for sharing such a wonderful piece. More Kleenex please.

Great story. The story idea was very interesting and definitely something different.

Fantastic, so glad so decided to read.

Simply Beautiful! I have tears in my eyes. It's just beautiful. Thank You for writing this masterpiece.

I love this! It's actually very refreshing to have good writing and an original story. Quick correction: Fred died, not George. But your writing was intentional then that's fine!

Hi!
I just HAVE to leave a review because this story it's absolutely fantastic, not to mention original.

I loved the way you express Hermione's feelings even if she sometimes made me want to slap her for being stupid. But then, she did something brilliant and everything became good and it's wonderful.

With Draco, I didn't love him one moment to hate him the next. I loved him every moment he appeared during all the story. He is perfect, and BTW, his full name is Draco Lucius Malfoy, and if you want to add his mother's maiden name, Black; not Draco Abraxas Black Malfoy.

I can't help but notice that you did what you want with the characters, because Snape, Remus, Tonks, Vicent Crabbe and Fred were dead, and McGonnagall, George, Ron, Bill, Flitwick and many others were not xD
I mean, it's your story and of course you kill whoever you want, but if you have to kill Weasleys, then kill Fred (who is already dead), Ron (like you did) or Percy, but not George and Bill! They are nice!

I liked how you explained the classes (I learnt a lot!) and the Slytherins' feelings, along with Harry and Hermione's relationship. It was very nice to read :)

And, this is just my opinion, I think you should separate the scenes someway, because I sometimes had difficulty understanding how the hell that sentence fit on the scene to finally notice that said sentence is from another scene.

I loved the story, I loved the end and this is going to my favs list :)

LadyChocolateLover

PD: I was astonished when you wrote about Vulpe. She is a nice OC, even if she is a Lestrange.

PD2: I'm sorry for any posible grammar or spelling mistakes, English is not my first language.

So beautiful.