Reviews for The Box Ghost's Revenge
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
How is the box ghost supposed to kidnap danny and family?
1) Beware! Fear me!
2)Beware! Fear my boxes!
xThomas2 chapter 15 . 12/6/2014
Well box ghost was an actual antagonist. Man you pulled it off. That's cool
xThomas2 chapter 3 . 12/6/2014
Ok, hold up, hold up. Danny let his parents get, what, kidnapped? He had the power to save them.
And he can't escape Lancer? What about overshadowing? Or scare him with ghost powers?
The kidnapping part of the story has a horrible explanation.
Liliana Dragonshard chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Nice, real nice. Keep it up!

GhostAnn chapter 15 . 10/13/2012
Nice, I finally got around to finishing this story. It was really well done.
ForestEmerald chapter 15 . 1/23/2012
Loved this story and I hope there is a sequel.
sapphireswimming chapter 15 . 4/13/2011
Hahaha. This was a really fun story. I was not expecting anything like this when I first clicked on it. I wondered what on earth the Box Ghost could actually do to Team Phantom without this just being a humor story, but you proved me wrong and came out with a great plot.

I know I'm getting around to this several years later... but I really enjoy what you've done with the characters. You wrote for everyone really well, I felt like everything was as it should be and nothing stuck out like a sore thumb. :)

I really liked the use of dreams in the story. They were very powerful in propelling the plot line forward while also setting the tone. I really felt sorry for Maddie as she was bombarded by all of these crazy visions and half truths that she didn't want to believe- talk about nightmares! And Danny's repeating and expanding dreams about the castle and Sam were used really effectively.

And Aradia was great. I was not expecting her to be anything like what she turned out to be, but you created a great character for her, with her history, costume, and crazy cat. I liked how you made her back story intertwined with Danny's future. I have never seen a story that made use of that and I thought it was a great and really realistic was to bring in another character with an actual grudge against Danny. I wondered how she was able to travel back in time in order to carry out her plans, but, I thought everything else worked out well.

I had a lot of fun reading this piece. Loved the character interactions and the descriptions were very well-done. I liked the reactions of Lancer and Maddie to nobody ever talking about Danny... everything came together really well here. I enjoyed it a lot and look forward to the sequel.

AvatarKatara38 chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
I loved the entire story, it was suspenseful and very descriptive. In my opinion, you are a very talented writer! I hope you make the sequel soon!
Lady Liesl chapter 15 . 7/1/2006
omfg...its done! NO! Oh, sleep warrior I'm going to miss this so much...its also made me realize something very important...I havent written in murder damage or drive shaft in about 2 months...not looking forward to angry reviewrs when I get back ] awesome job with this though-its really was amazing!

Elizabeth White chapter 15 . 6/29/2006
Very well written story. You may want to have the Box Ghost releasin Dan and Dan Trying to destroy all Danny holds near and dear, in an attempt to undo Clockwork's meddling.
Nobody is Somebody chapter 15 . 6/27/2006
Well, I looked at the title and summary and that pulled me in if you need to know, but that was a totally sweet ending! And I'll get back to you on your PM, but my comp is being a jerk and not letting me visit your profile for some dumb reason. (I'm fifteen and stuck with like eight year old parental blocks, but I can get my dad to unlock it tomorrow.) But until then... Good luck!
Kirstyn.T chapter 15 . 6/27/2006
AH SUCH A HEADACHE! Sorry, my head is hurting... GREAT story! Loved it! Umm... I think I found out about it when I was looking through the Danny Phantom section one day. Can't wait till you post the sequel... in December...

Love Kirst...
darkflame1516 chapter 15 . 6/26/2006
uh...u were in such a rush to put it up that u left a note in at the bottom of the Danny/Sam part...(okay, now to the actual review...)


*sigh* oh well, at least there is the sequel to look forward to...i absolutely cannot wait for that...i love this chap and the whole, from the emotional ping-pong Maddie goes through to Aradia's plot, to the BG's new look, to Danny and Sam's was AWESOME! i *sniff* am so sad to see it end...oh, and i loved the diff twist at the end...awesomeness...that IS Lydia right? what we were talking bout...i confuzzled as usual...

oh, go on AIM when u get this, i'll be on all night (as long as my net doesnt crap out)

again, glorious praise to the exalted Sleep Warrior! many u cause many nightmares in those who dont review...

oh and i remember how i found this was from The Way of The Ghost: The First Portal...that author's saying that u'd haunt dreams of non-reviewers made me look through the reviews for that, i found ur profile...blah...get it?

but! i didnt read ur story until i was cruising the DP fics and wanted to see the fics listed under the bit characters search on and so forth...
Leppers chapter 14 . 5/11/2006
Great story! It's really well-written and I love the characterization.
Lady Liesl chapter 14 . 5/9/2006, second to last chapter and already it feels as if I just started leaving this! Oh, I cant beleive you're going to abandon me after this next one *sobs into computer* DONT LEAVE! And-oh crap! I've really got to catch up on my fics...also, on this user name I've been coming up with his new one I plan on posting very soon ;) hope you can see it when I finally think of a name for it, and I cant wait for the last chapter!

'~I Brake For Ghosts~'
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