|Reviews for His Son's Father|
| Trouble Kelp chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Wow, this is really good, and the plot is really intricate. Really, really good. Please update soon.
| Kitty Rainbow chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
You have far too much talent. I may have to kill you. Except then I would never find out what happens. Darn. I wonder if I could get it off Gus...
*stops musing about that and gets back to reviewing the fic*
This is great. I love it already. And since you've already written all of it, you have no excuse for not posting the rest of it right now. NOW, you hear me? :P
I really, really want to give you con crit but I am struggling to find anything to complain about. It's in character, it's tense, it's got an interesting plot, the narrative is good, it has a touch of humour and a neat shock at t
| lalalalalala chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
*does first review dance*
love it so far, though I hope you update soon