Reviews for A Phoenix
quizzabella chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Pretty. Nice choice of words and i loved the final sentence.
Dream Phantom chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Nice. Great job.
Roisin Dubh chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I'd hardly call it drabble. ;-)

Nice description and nice concept. I think if I was going to suggest anything it would be to give the middle of the phoenix's life a bit more beef, and maybe a bit more at the end... only a few paragraphs for each.

But you're so descriptive about its birth and then when it is ready to regenerate you only cover that in a few sentences. Does the bird's plumage fade? What triggers its urge to return to the cave?

Just a few bit for you to ruminate on... :-)

Ciao bella!
UniCornVampire3z chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Oh, this was a very interesting drabble, i love how you described how everything was effected by the phoenix song. very pretty!