Reviews for Chaos in the Moon
spicarus chapter 4 . 6/21/2015
You say, aside from Nabiki and Cologne, not to expect much from the rest of the NWC because Ranma and Ryoga have a destiny that they don't fit. But, seriously, when have the NWC ever thought like that. There's no way either of the Kuno's would let up on Ranma so long as they thought one of his/her sides was keeping the other away from them. And then there's Mousse and Shampoo and, possibly, oh the horror, Happosai.

But I suppose that you've already somehow dealt with Ukyo so that she wont ever show up.
Flareup4Ratchet chapter 8 . 10/19/2013
This is a very good story. Very interesting indeed and I cracked up over the Cheese Sandwich...Poor Luna must have been embarrassed. Something tells me Artemis used to laugh at her for that. :P I wish you had continued this though...
Ranmaleopard chapter 8 . 2/9/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
cool! this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
silverstreak93242 chapter 8 . 10/20/2011
well, you know, honestly, I have lost count of the number of times I have said variations on this same theme, but well, here goes...I really enjoyed reading this story the first time I came across it, and I enjoyed going back and re-reading it! I am hoping it isn't dead, it's just that you muse took a long unexpected vacation! As for the question of whether Mina and Mousse should wind up being a couple, hehe, that might be for the best in that she would have someone to love that would be loyal and faithful! Just need to do something about his eye's is all! If he were to be cursed, should probably be something a little more useful than spring of drowned duck! More along the line's of spring of drowned wolf or something like that, or a mixed spring that will let him fight to an extent with the senshi! Anyways, hope this review finds you well! Looking forward to reading the next chapters if you are able to hunt down your muse, or maybe you should simply hire a new one? LOL, anyhow, again I hope this finds you well!
god of all chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Nightgazer333 chapter 8 . 6/18/2008
Nearly Indi-cent chapter 8 . 6/10/2008
I am interested to see how this develops, Although I would suggest not putting it all out there so quickly, let some suspense fester for a while.

Also where are the other royal guard boys?

I am excited to see them show up
Asgeras chapter 8 . 5/20/2008
(sniffle) That's definitely a sad note to end things on. True, a lot of what the Amazons did was underhanded, but still...(sigh) Cologne would have made such a great advisor for Ranma too...

I don't know why I took so long to get to this fic. I surmise that it's because you've put it somewhat on the backburner in preference to some of your newer fics such as Twin Trouble. While I DO like Twin Trouble, I think this fic is actually a mite bit better. It definitely has its highlights, that's for sure.

No matter what the case may be, though, thanks for sharing this fic and I do hope to see an update sometime in the not-so-distant future. Ja ne.
Daniel Thomas Stack chapter 8 . 5/17/2008
In case you want to include them in memories or anecdotes to classmates or the Senshi when they start wanting to find out about the previous few months here is how I see Ranma's more common insults to Akane revised for this fic.

You're built like a brick! - no change needed.

You're completely too thick! - instead of thighs are too thick.

You talk like a Hick! - This one never made sense to me.

Can't even kick! - no change needed

Uncute Tomboy - Both still fit.

You're food makes me sick! - Don't remember it being used but it fits. At least after the camping trip where Ryouga learns the Bauksai Tenketsu which didn't happen in this fic.

I still have no clue why Washu in Goddess form would take the Nyannichuan. Unless there's someone else with 3 stones on their head. Oh your notes list the person taking the water as Leena. Is that an OC? And I still don't see why they took it all. I hope you can continue this soon. I'd love to see Naru and Umino's reaction to 2 Usagi's. You did already make it pretty clear that they would make Ranma go in girl form.

Will Setsuna's mother be a school councilor? Does this Leena have any minions planned yet and will any of the later series events from Sailor Moon Manga or Anime show up in this fic?

Lots of questions but it has been a while since the last update of CitM.

Daniel Thomas Stack

Spokavriel yahoo . com
Sheylenna chapter 8 . 8/9/2007
I await the next chapter
Taeniaea chapter 8 . 5/16/2007
I Love The Chapter:8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!
borg rabbit chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
The existence of a Sailor moon manga is a little strange. Maybe you could have something to explain the presence, like an author being a channeler.. or something.


Spelling and grammar narc:

I’ll barrow the Janitor’s kettle and we can change you back then

I’ll borrow the Janitor’s kettle

“So long as it’s accredited to my dept.”

“So long as it’s accredited to my debt.”

His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno help him stray from it for a bit

His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno helped him stray from it for a bit

(I really think that this could be phrased better, as in:

His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno helped to remove the dream from his consciousness for a bit)

in fact consider you dept canceled.

in fact consider you debt canceled.

After school Nabiki went strait to work.

After school Nabiki went straight to work.

Please take a careful look at the rest of your stuff or get a good copy editor.
Blackdex chapter 8 . 3/23/2007
Please continue.
Adeptis chapter 8 . 3/18/2007
Good chapter ;D
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