Reviews for Hidden Village of the Elves
Celechan chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Quite an adventure for those two! The last-last sentence seemed kind of out of place. Also, isn't there a larger age gap between Raine and Genis? But still, interesting little story/poem. _
JanieUchiha chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
this was really good..but did u say this was apoem?..it didnt seem like a poem..it was more like a short story...but it was good all the same...well i enjoyed alot...keep up the good work!
Jazzy-kid chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Andi- Hi agin. I liked this was great. How you doin'?
Storm chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I don't think you shoul have explained your end sentence. It takese away from it's finality.
Storm chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I don't think you shoul have explained your end sentence. It takese away from it's finality.