"She sure loved the melodramatic."

Is that a hint of snark I see? Nice -_o.

Why does this not have more reviews?

You have a very distinctive style, though I can't quite put a name to it. The battles feel nicely dark and warlike without getting too much, and it...well, sounds like a person telling the story. First person is hard and I think you do it well.

And I love how even with a weapon that ould be an easy way out writing-wise, the PAC wolves still get beaten up, and you still wonder how fights will end...

A tale of treachery, of double-dealing and of impasse both in politics and in the height of battle, I salute you...

However, can I suggest upgrading the PAC-wolves from command wolves to something a little more powerful, for example the Konig wolf as a base design... (the Konig wolf being bigger and having more power to put behind its weapons- even if it comes unarmed unless you upgrade for a twin barreled sniper turret and four missile pods- though I suppose you could develop other specialist weapons for the design...)

Mercenary Pen, signing off...

WOW! :) Another PAC Wolf epic adventrue, a little slower getting started than the first I think, but still highly enjoyable. Loved PAC-1's reactions to Jeremy's emotions, With such effort I hope he gets repaird instead of scrapped like the original did. Great descriptive work throughout the battle, well worth waiting for.

I'm assuming that by the 'To be continued' part your going to write either more chapter's or a PACWolves I, either way this is one fan, who is garanteed to read it :)

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