Kentcharm chapter 7 . 11/16/2005
and how could clark and lana be together?... its a chlark story isnt it? thats whats its under. i think you should keep going with this story, it wouldnt be right not too
Kentcharm chapter 8 . 11/16/2005
how could you end it there? who did her love?
Crazy Danae chapter 8 . 11/16/2005
It was definitely an interesting story. I'm not sure if it's an anagram if you don't use all the letters, but I'm willing to let it go. I'll be interested in seeing what you come up with in the future. :D
Stormatcher chapter 7 . 11/14/2005
The story is great. I really like it so far. But could you check your grammar and some sentence don't quite make any sense...

like this one...

“I wonder what they don’t what you to know?” Lionel said.
ILuvPiratesSavvy chapter 5 . 11/5/2005
OMG! You have to update! I must know what happens! Its great so far!
notreallyhere12345 chapter 5 . 10/29/2005
dun dun dun! cant wait till you get the next chapter done!
Kquilono chapter 4 . 10/25/2005
Great plot, can't wait to see more!

You might want to spell check it and grammar cheak. If I had more time I would go over it sentance by sentance and tell you what could use some improvement.
Kentcharm chapter 4 . 10/24/2005
Good good good! UPDATE SOON!

Crazy Danae chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
I find this really interesting. So after Lana wakes, she's no longer after Lex but now is after Clark? And how can Chloe continue to fight the effects of the gas? And does Lois feel any of the effects? I don't think you've written her feeling anything as of yet. Is it pain that knocks out the effect?
Crazy Danae chapter 2 . 10/12/2005
I'm interested how long this is going to go on and how you're going to resolve it. But I do like how you're using Red Kryptonite in this fic.
Dark Phoenix 13X chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Loving it, update soon.
anywbshowlover chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
They better hurry.