|Reviews for Fallen Angel|
| Dane chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
I really like how you did on Flay's characterization :)
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 66 . 8/6/2011
wow cool story I liked it so much
| S chapter 66 . 5/9/2011
Hey, saying hi to this story again! This is an instant classic for me, and I'm proud to have read this back when I'm a Freshman in College, and it was ongoing back then I was watching out for updates. Now, I'm a Professional Nurse, and still loving this story.
You probably forgot about me though. :)
| AcisSej chapter 66 . 4/12/2011
first of all, i never imagined anyone would make something like this. as a person who loves to make stories, 66 chapters? that's damn too hard. i really love the story. God speed!
| Solitary Sanctuary chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I've read, reviewed this story before when you're in the middle of it... maybe 3 years ago? But that doesn't matter now. Even before you finished this... I've already re-read it TWICE, and since after it's ending and epilogue, I've read it around THRICE already...
This story is wonderful, I can't fathom how much time, effort, and dedication you've put in here. Hopefully I could write like you.
I've already PM'd you once, and we've talked about stuffs about your writing style, and etc. Hopefully, I can write up a good chapter...
Because God knows I've started planning for this, 3 years ago, stopped, and continued now, with a huge overhaul in the story. xD
I'm going to PM you when it's done. Best regards NoshMono.
(Anonymous because USER is LAZY to LOG-IN. ;;)
| nick2951 chapter 66 . 3/8/2010
Not only does it wrap everything up in the Fallen Angel universe, it makes sure that there is not a trace of anything to wonder about. An alls well ends well ending.
Excellent fic and hope to read more from you soon!
| manhualover85 chapter 66 . 2/24/2010
you've continue to write it XD i like how you put the story about sunny, the plot are the same as what have happened to kira :D about kira's name i saw in a chinese translation (not sure about the meaning) does it really mean "shine"?...the last part was nice for an ending XD
| nequam-tenshi chapter 66 . 2/22/2010
AWE! great ending!
| Chloe Riede chapter 66 . 2/20/2010
LOL, Fllay basically narrating an FA/SA for dummies. Nice Ending... but I'm worried about their daughter. Here's hoping to hoping that the Implants Last like the energizer bunny.
| RedCrimson chapter 66 . 2/20/2010
A little bit deep compared to the last update concerning that issue that kira and flay might die due to the chip later on, despite that this is all fiction, it would be a sad fate for their daughter to lose them one day.
Overall, it was a great story, and a great conclusion.
It was good to see cagalli and flay talking with each other as friends, and for cagalli to be spending time with her niece, I am doing a similar scene for the three characters in my own story.
Once again, Thanks for the great story and hope that if you come up with another idea for a kiraXflay story in the future, you go through with it.
| HolyKnight5 chapter 66 . 2/20/2010
Heh...Sunny...and the meaning on Japanese? Hinata..hehehe...Hinata Yamato...
| istabulol chapter 65 . 2/20/2010
dude u have a mistake the chap 65 is the same as 66 plz fix
great stories (FA and SA) :)
| EmperorDraco7 chapter 66 . 2/20/2010
Every touching epilogue, even better than the original one. I seriously thought that the moments placed were wonderful as well as Cagalli being able to spend time with her neice as well as Dearka's surprising reunion with Mir. This is how Destiny should have been and I really thought that the developement was better than in the canon saga.
This has been a great story, I love it.
| Chloe Riede chapter 65 . 2/10/2010
I'm guessing that Fllay will be executed. Unity, especially it's leader wants her dead. But to no avail, i'm going to predict an escape.
| EmperorDraco7 chapter 65 . 2/9/2010
Wow, I didn't expect for the UNITY to wish for Flay dead for the crimes she had done in Soaring Above but I'm glad that she and Kira finally made amends. Also, thanks for reviewing Soaring Above: Another Road and I am planning on continuing it to honor you and your fics.
This epilogue was great, even better than the Soaring Above one (no offense). I really enjoyed both fics and I hope to do my best in expressing the Shinn x Cagalli pairing in Another Road. I also hope that people who enjoyed both your fics will like mine.