Reviews for Locked In Silence
Gage39 chapter 14 . 6/20/2009
I LOVED this story and the fact that you had Gage and Sydney on there. I still think that you should have had a slightly different ending. I just didn't like the way Carlos left the bar. Good story though.
Riker15 chapter 14 . 12/11/2005
Very Nice Job add more soon
Guest chapter 14 . 10/29/2005
It is clear that you are concerned for others, and that you were determined to handle this subject matter with care and concern. You did very well.

Again, I thank you for your sensitivity.

Is there any chance of a sequel? :)
Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2005
Arrgghh! I'm eager for the reunion, and we're still *waiting*! :) Thanks for telling a good story.
crazy4tv chapter 11 . 10/26/2005
OMG!OMG!OMG! AH...OMG!OMG!OMG! AH...OMG!OMG!OMG! OK OK OK I'm having a panic attack that only another chapter will stop..Unless of course you leave us with ANOTHER cliffhanger...(Which by the way your really good at) Keep up the wonderful writting...

PS.. I have all the girls in the office checking for updates ALL day EVERYDAY...I think you got them hooked..
Guest chapter 11 . 10/25/2005
Yikes. Well done. And, yes, it was done tastefully. Not at all exploitational. Thank you for handling it delicately.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/25/2005
You are a very compassionate person. It's really sweet of you to adjust your story for me, but it's okay, really. I can skim the parts that I need to, and if it became too difficult, I could just stop reading. Thank you for planning to change your story a bit for me, but it's okay, really. I'd actually like to read your original story, if it's still okay with you. You're really sweet to take care of me like that, though. :)
crazy4tv chapter 10 . 10/25/2005
This is so good...I have one question..Do you tease us on purpose or is it purely by accident? Please update real soon ...
Guest chapter 9 . 10/24/2005
Wow. I haven't reviewed yet, but I have to, now. Having been a victim of childhood sexual abuse, I'm dreading what poor Carlos is about to endure.
crazy4tv chapter 7 . 10/19/2005
Great story..Keep up the good work..would like to see longer chapters...
crazy4tv chapter 6 . 10/16/2005
Great story can't wait for the next chapter...Update soon
crazy4tv chapter 5 . 10/11/2005
Great start to the story keep it going but with longer chapters...
Jessie13 chapter 4 . 10/7/2005
good chapter.. but may i suggest you making them longer? they're hardly even a paragraph long.
mcatB chapter 3 . 10/7/2005
Great start to the story. I'm looking forward to all the upcoming angst... And you don't need to explain away your plot device - I think Carlos was being human. Very understandable. And it's a great way to introduce some later conflict. Keep going - but with longer chapters...
Space-Case7029 chapter 2 . 10/3/2005
Good chapters. Really feel bad for Carlos. As tough as he seems it's hard to see him really scared, which has been shown on the shows: Walker and Sons.
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