Reviews for An Alternate Path
Guest chapter 24 . 6/27/2016
You've got quite an interesting story and ideas, but comparing the writing style between this one and your other two long stories feels like day and night. This just goes to show that even great writers have to start from somewhere.
zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 8 . 6/25/2016
that is the stuff of nightmares
zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 3 . 6/24/2016
interesting so you turned hanabi into what is essentially fem. neji
Guest chapter 22 . 3/25/2016
When are you going to update
FlawlessMirage chapter 27 . 3/3/2016
Yooooooooooo, its been a few year... any chance of an update coming soon?

This is a well written story, the shipping in particular has reeled me in.
steamrick chapter 3 . 1/4/2016
Wow... beginning to read this one after having read your current stories there's a world of difference in the writing.
Also, Arashi for the Yondaime's name. A trip down memory lane, that one :)
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 8 . 12/1/2015

How were the teddy bears moving?
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 7 . 12/1/2015
Woah, I'm gonna try some of those tricks with my friends...
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 5 . 12/1/2015
That's a lot of history. I find having no hand seals a little weird though. carry on.
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 4 . 12/1/2015
Hiashi seems nice in a weird way...
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 3 . 12/1/2015
Shouldn't the kyubi be expanding the coils? If it's completely your take on the story then I don't mind.
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
Hm, Lazy. I like the sound of that :P
Mr.Destructo chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
you know in the naruto vs orochimaru on the bridge naruto peels all his own skin off going from 3 tails to 4 and even as early as the naruto vs sasuke during sasukes defection to orochimaru sasuke put a chidori which is made of a crapload of lightning through narutos chest and they show it healing perfectly from a wound that should have been cauterized at least partially i doubt a burn wound would stay on naruto long
Mr.Destructo chapter 16 . 11/8/2015
gotta love kekashi putting all his students in danger by telling them not to kill
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