Reviews for An Alternate Path
Rickmer chapter 3 . 1/4
Wow... beginning to read this one after having read your current stories there's a world of difference in the writing.
Also, Arashi for the Yondaime's name. A trip down memory lane, that one :)
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 8 . 12/1/2015

How were the teddy bears moving?
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 7 . 12/1/2015
Woah, I'm gonna try some of those tricks with my friends...
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 5 . 12/1/2015
That's a lot of history. I find having no hand seals a little weird though. carry on.
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 4 . 12/1/2015
Hiashi seems nice in a weird way...
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 3 . 12/1/2015
Shouldn't the kyubi be expanding the coils? If it's completely your take on the story then I don't mind.
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
Hm, Lazy. I like the sound of that :P
Mr.Destructo chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
you know in the naruto vs orochimaru on the bridge naruto peels all his own skin off going from 3 tails to 4 and even as early as the naruto vs sasuke during sasukes defection to orochimaru sasuke put a chidori which is made of a crapload of lightning through narutos chest and they show it healing perfectly from a wound that should have been cauterized at least partially i doubt a burn wound would stay on naruto long
Mr.Destructo chapter 16 . 11/8/2015
gotta love kekashi putting all his students in danger by telling them not to kill
Mr.Destructo chapter 14 . 11/7/2015
so hinata seems like psychotic yandere and ino seems like a heartless gold digging bitch control freak i'm sorry i know it was probably supposed to be funny but Naruto is a fucking pussy he paid for a eight thousand dollar dress despite knowing he is poor i would've told the guy at the register to call the cops cause that woman just stole that dress fucking stupid to pay for a dress the cost of a cheap brand new car just cause you where left alone in a building
Nerfhearder69 chapter 27 . 4/25/2015
And you just left it there!? You ARE one evil bastard...
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2015
Is this supposed to be crack... No offense, I like it.
dragoncreators chapter 27 . 8/7/2013
PLEASE finish your story! it is awesome!
dragoncreators chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
o.0 a... herem?
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