Reviews for An Alternate Path
shelwyn chapter 19 . 4/19/2010
Enough to say, he was almost in tearswhen she was through with him.

:/

ARE YA SHITTIN MEH!

Doctors aren't going to let soem ninja brats see a patient :/

STORY RUIN I NO READ NO MORE!

hehe...
shelwyn chapter 18 . 4/19/2010
"Want to go out for lunch tomorrow?"

lol Great timing xD
shelwyn chapter 17 . 4/19/2010
This chapter gave me a crappy feeling in the pit of my stoma... eh gut actually, wait that's my ass no? Eh somewhere around my lungs or liver hm i need to learn soem anatomy...
shelwyn chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
'Didn't he tell you the eighth?'

OH Oh oh...

...oh...

Hey Naruto was preety awesome in his fight :D
shelwyn chapter 15 . 4/18/2010
At the mention of cleaning the three dogs literally jumped to their feet and made their escape through the back of the clinic.

"Get back here!" yelled Hana as she shook her fist in the air at the retreating dogs before she turned angrily to Naruto. "What are you waiting for? Fetch!" she demanded pointing after the dogs.

hehe Fetch xD

Great word usage in your fic :3

Oh its Kabuto :o
shelwyn chapter 14 . 4/18/2010
The first thing i noticed was that your chapters are getting much longer. I love you and your longness... *giggle*

If you haven't already read With the heart and underwear of Fire by Diamond Avatar go read it now, Chapter tens Itachi mock almost made me die, BY MY OWN SALIVA! That is right, I almost choked on my own saliva. So, I command you to love the story.

I like this story so i'll do it. After I finish this fic anyway :D

' Amazing! Hanabi is a Genius, does this make him a genius to? He's landing just as many blows to her as she is to him, But, he hasn't got the Byakugan activated, does that mean… HE'S A SUPERGENIUS?

' If I can beat Naruto then I can beat Hanabi, I can prove myself without hurting her! NARUTO YOU ARE MY RIVAL FROM NOW ON!'

"Gai-sensei…" Lee said softly.

Without taking his eyes off the fight Gai nodded.

omg haha i love you and your comedy :D

Longness 3
shelwyn chapter 13 . 4/18/2010
It was a nice fight, it was good of you to let Anbu-Chan let them fight with taijutsu nice fights for genin :P
shelwyn chapter 12 . 4/18/2010
yesterday she was Hinata-sama, today she's Hinata-Chan? What's happened between you both? "

" She asked me to call her that, Did you know that because you whispered to me first she is going to do something right about n-"

' You'll never find out. '

xD!

"QUIET DOWN! "To which everyone flinched. Hearing no change in the classrooms decibel level Iruka looked up annoyed

XD omg hahah lol XD

Sasuke was smiling slightly, but still was giving Naruto a weird look. Hinata on the other hand was blushing a brilliant shade of red. Naruto released a small burst of laughter at Hinata before aptly cutting it short seeing the potential glare she was about to sport.

hehe

" My name is Uchiha Sasuke, I like Naruto and Training. I dislike a lot of things. It isn't much of a dream. I prefer to call it an Ambition. And it is to…Remove certain mans genitals and beat him to death with them. " Sasuke finished darkly.

omg ahahahhahahhaha XD

'They want me

OH HELL YE...

Oh wait i stopped reading to soon :
shelwyn chapter 11 . 4/18/2010
Hey isn't Guard his friend :/

?

"Good old Body, always giving off heat when I need you. "

"What! Haven't you ever seen anyone talk to their servants? "Neji asked incredulously.

haha that was great xD
shelwyn chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
How dare she talk to Naruto-kun!

haha

My first on purpose cliff hanger, although it's more of a small stair like fall.

AND HERE I THOUGHT YOU WERE COOL BUT NO YOU RUINED IT! D:

lol
shelwyn chapter 9 . 4/18/2010
"I'm telling you Neji, You're a man now! " Naruto exclaimed as he threw his hands up for emphasis.

D: A TIME SKIP D:

You've been had by your own son.

DARN THIS TIME SKIP!

I will Force you to withstand the greatest Chakra control exercise of all time. " He finished lightly glaring at Naruto.

Naruto's interest of aroused by the prospect of learning anything new about Chakra control. "What does it involve? "

Hiashi simply smiled down at Naruto before explaining.

"It involves me throwing you into an active volcano and you having to get out of the magma alive. "

:O!
shelwyn chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
"Naruto… if we don't make it know this. Since you've come here I have started to see you as the little brother I never had. And if we do make it I am going to kick your ass. "

And boy did his ass get kic...

OMG WHAT DO YOU MEAN THEY DDINT MAKE IT OUT ALIVE D:!

"Guard! " "Naruto! " Both Naruto and Guard respectively yelled out and lunged at each other, hugging the other tightly as if they were going to disappear. "I thought you... "They both began but stopped soon afterwards as they interrupted each other. " You go said Naruto happily. "

Oh man this is great xD
shelwyn chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
Right when i saw the chapters title i wa slike OH YEAH BABY! 8D

Not willing to take the chance Naruto activated Glittering eyes Technique full power on Guard. Guard having never felt the power of the Technique before fell into a half trance.

xD

"Mommy did someone just go to heaven?"

"I'm not sure dear

Oh god that one really made me lauch out loud haha people were all like wth O_o
shelwyn chapter 6 . 4/18/2010
"Guard! Damn it! I was enjoying that!

lol

"Well you see…WHAT THE HELL IS THAT? "

XD! hehehehehe funny :D

why is she singing ?

I hope that sining doesn't have a large part in the story, or lyrics for that matter...
shelwyn chapter 5 . 4/18/2010
I have a feeling Guard is gona die D:
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