Reviews for An Alternate Path
ChaosRonin chapter 3 . 10/5/2005
hmm i like were this is going, cant wait to see what naruto learns in his 1 year of training
Sarah chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Don't feel Cliche. Even the author of the actual manga uses Sasuke and Hinata as cliche plot devices. From the moment she was introduced it was pretty much accepted canon that she ends up with Naruto. Sasuke needs a psychotic best friend to make up for his lack of personality and Naruto fits that quite nicely. I think had things started earlier like they seem to in your story, Naruto would have already started a happy relationship with Hinata, and Sasuke would never have done what he did. Just a thought and good job!
Sarah chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Don't feel Cliche. Even the author of the actual manga uses Sasuke and Hinata as cliche plot devices. From the moment she was introduced it was pretty much accepted canon that she ends up with Naruto. Sasuke needs a psychotic best friend to make up for his lack of personality and Naruto fits that quite nicely. I think had things started earlier like they seem to in your story, Naruto would have already started a happy relationship with Hinata, and Sasuke would never have done what he did. Just a thought and good job!
emikae chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
lookit! a review!

it has ninjas.. i like it.

nick likes to think that he's a ninja...

and i have yet to get past his gaurd so he may be right.

~emikae
SuBeKi011213 chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
cool

are you aiming for NaruHina?...if yes, YAY!

I like Evangelion too! so cool, but really confusing...but its still so cool

only problem is the talking parts of the series is to dull(wouldn't you agree?) all they do is talk, no action n stuff
MingShun chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Interesting guesses about the motives behind Kyuubi's sealing. Possible too.
Fallen Dragon chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Update soon!
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