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Firefly264 chapter 29 . 3/27/2013
Just wondering, is this abandoned? Because it looks like it, but this story is really great! Please continue with it, I really would like to see how it turns out, especially with all the buildup these last few chapters! You chose quite the horrible open ending when you left this fic, and I really want to see how Ed and Mustang are going to get out of this (not to mention Izumi is probably going to be pretty pissed and Edo .). Also, thank you for not killing Hughes! That alone gets a thumbs up in my books.
Toraus chapter 3 . 4/17/2008
Aw, Elysia is so sweet. She makes depressing sences more depressing with her not understandingness. (I don't think that's even a word...) Onward to read the rest! -
Katty008 chapter 4 . 9/15/2007
This is incredibly emo, but I loved the forgery line. Great work!
reighost chapter 29 . 3/26/2007
nice! this is such a good fic! mind recommending others of this quality?
Wing Omega chapter 29 . 11/25/2006
It's nice to see this is still going but they need to hurry up and rescue Sheska already.
Haunted Obsidian chapter 6 . 10/26/2006
I like the length of the chapters too. It's nice to read something contrise and to the point.
Haunted Obsidian chapter 4 . 10/26/2006
That was so sweet! I love the different characters perspectives as well. ;)
Haunted Obsidian chapter 3 . 10/26/2006
I probably won't be able to get through all of it today, but I'm defintely going to read the whole thing. You have a plot that not a lot of writers couldn't pull off so I'm anxious to see where you're going with it. I love it so far! ;D
Haunted Obsidian chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
I am so hooked on this. Thanks! XD
LachwenII chapter 29 . 10/24/2006
Wow! Great job so far! XD
Lee chapter 29 . 10/18/2006
This is incredible! Continue, please!
Child of a Pineapple chapter 29 . 10/17/2006
Ooh...I liked this chapter. I really liked those last lines...and the whore analogy.
winryrockbell2 chapter 29 . 10/11/2006
That was a pretty good chapter! It was awesome! Can't wait for the next one!
Lil Italiano chapter 29 . 10/7/2006
WOW! This is really interesting and just amazing really.. Poor Ed, I wish he'd remember everything NOW but that wouldn't make a good story now would it? GAH! Update soon please!
InuyashaLuver1224 chapter 29 . 10/7/2006
Man, you took forever! Sigh, at least you updated, I haven't done that for ages. I shall take you example! Please update soon!
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