|Reviews for Gaze|
| CrimsonSnow chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Short, sweet, and on-the-mark
Author, you're awesome
| goingcommando chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
| shadowcat15 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I love Riza. I didn't think much of her at first, but I guess she grows on you. You portrayed hers and Roy's relationship perfectly.
| butterflie chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Oh, that was very nice! I liked that; I've always thought that Hawkeye was a very perceptive person
| Ildreen Love chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I have a rule of never reading a fic from a fandom I don't know at least who is who in the story. That is the case of Full Metal Alchemist.
However, since this is a one shot, and it's from you I decided to bend the rule a little... rules are made for that after all!
So what did I think about it?
Well written, traveling between amusement and the romance watched from afar. It was easy to read and digest, just the way I like them.
Definitely worth bending the rules.
I'll be waiting for your next work.
| mmmslash chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Nice job with this! Your characterizations were great; your Hawkeye was one of the best that I have read. You portrayed Mustang's apprehension at the end perfectly, built excellent tension throughout, and tied it all together nicely at the end. I am definitely favoriting this one.