Reviews for The Line Begins to Blur
starbuckfaerie21 chapter 2 . 8/16/2006
What did it say?
distel chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
... I...I'm at a loss for words...I...please...there has to be more...I mean, it can't just endlike this...thy could brake over this!
welcometotheoc chapter 2 . 11/21/2005
wow it was soo good! and dont worry shall take that advice to heart, tho i dont think i will be reading anytime soon seeing as i go to a lubavitch synagouge!

anyways really good chapter! is taking my mind of the bloody aussie idol final in the background, really hate that show but REALLY LOVE YOUR CHAPTER!

anailuj chapter 2 . 11/14/2005
Please write soon. I really liked it.
Elise chapter 2 . 11/13/2005

kursk chapter 2 . 11/9/2005
Great chapter, although I must say that at first ryan acted like an ass with marissa.

Hopefully after they read the letter, they will become stronger.

Update soon.
welcometotheoc chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
wow its soo good, i hadn't read your other story so i went back and read yesterday and it was amazing as well, and l'shana tova to you too! although its a bit late and i hope you fasted well, two weeks ago that is *cough*cough*

Keep on writin cant wait to read more and i certainly shall go read your other stories now

Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
oh wow! Update soon!
misssida chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
omg...i love this story so much...

it is so fantastic i don't know what to say

exept for that i can't wait to find out what the note read or what will happen between ryan and marissa or what has happened to trey...update again son

please...for my sanitys sake...;P
I-Believe-In-The-Butterflies chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Wait just a minute!

This was perfectly awesome and I loved every bit of how Ryan and Marissa are happy and that they are all good and stuff...

But I thought you were gonna let us know what was in the letter! You just left it there! UGH! Is there going to be another chapter or something? I want to know what's in that letter! I'm going to go crazy just like Marissa was! LOL.

This was great anyways and the song completely rocks!

I loved how you continued 7 years...and I don't know why you didn't get more reviews for that completely blew me away. SO did this one!

Thank you for writing. You're amazing.

You ROck! -J
kursk chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Good transition chapter, I just hope that they will read it together.

Update ASAP.