Reviews for Paved Paradise
machievelli chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Posted 26 November 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic s Two Cents.

About 20 years post TSL: A member of the Onasi family returns to Telos just in time to be kidnapped.

I kept following this trying to figure out who it was. The voice sounded too young to be Dustil, and we can’t be sure if he is a direct descendant of Carth or merely a blood relative.
Kallamae chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I'm usually not a big fan of stories with a first person pov, but I really liked this. Well done!

Bryce is a great original character. I'm going to have to go back and read those other stories now...

I hope you continue this!