|Reviews for Concern|
| rajvir chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I really like this story along with the ideea al thinks about eds pain.
| K a w a i i - S y a o r a n chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
That was good. Really really good. *nods* Man. I wish I could read "Family" [ I'm not old enough though. -_-; One day..one day..2 years from now. ]
Anyway I love how it's written from Al's prospective this time.
| Crystalazer chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Such a beautiful piece of work; I love Alphonse.
Now I love him even more. Very nice job digging deep into the heart of the character.
| tir-synni chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
*cuddles Al* As if he didn't have enough problems, he has to worry about his brother, too.
| Terry-McElrath chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Once again you have delved so accurately into one of the Fullmetal Alchemist characters. Al is my second favorite character and I love how you portray him. This story had me nearly in tears because I feel so strongly for him. Just one note, though. There was a word left out near the end of the story: "that perfectly sincere fake grin that his pain." I think you intended "that *hid* his pain." Anyway, I absolutely loved the story! Thanks for taking the time from your busy schedule to write and share your vision of Fullmetal Alchemist. I hope you are enjoying college. Take care!