Reviews for nothings wrong
Monkee-J chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I'll say what I said before; Good story but DUDE, USE A SPELLCHECK! It's hurting my eyes looking at it and your making me work harder just to understand what your writing about. And it kinda takes the romance out of it...
no offense intended chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
um u should probably use a spellchecker